ACTUALLY make the book better / Editing using beta reader feedback @NicoleWilbur

Uploaded September 2023 | Updated September 2026, 2 weeks ago

So we all know beta readers are key. And we know we're supposed to edit our novels. But how do you get from raw reader comments to an actual edit plan, a plan that will improve the book for the most number of readers? This is how I'm organsing and processing my beta reader and critique partner feedback to improve my story.

Read more about my beta reader journey: nicolewilbur.substack.com/p/your-book-is-a-product?utm_source=profile&utm_medium=reader2

I'm Nicole Wilbur and I'm a writer and "story nerd", which basically means I love analyzing books, movies, and shows to understand how and why they work. I make videos about becoming a better writer, editing books, and writing resources. If this sounds good to you, hit the subscribe button! :)

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