kris | KM Fajardo | ๐ editing YOUR stories! // open workshop // edit with me @KrisMF | Uploaded July 2022 | Updated October 2024, 16 hours ago.
BIG thank you to all the writers who shared pieces. I was honoured to read your work! sorry I couldnโt get to more but Iโll try my best to do another video in the future, if thereโs interest. please be considerate in the comments to fellow writers, etc etc โ๏ธ
โ๏ธ featured writers
1 bumblebee
2 Adam Fishkin
3 Livy
timestamps:
0:00 intro
1:12 important disclaimers
2:16 submission 1 (CW - physical aggression)
3:07 initial thoughts, verb tense, phrasing, colloquialisms
7:38 sensory detail, simplifying, figurative language
13:04 imagery and description
15:55 shifting POV and dialogue rhythm
19:04 submission 2 - tone and form
24:11 submission 3
24:52 openings and spooky vibes
26:47 characterization and relationships
29:40 example edit and character voice
37:30 share your thoughts!
_____
more videos:
โจ line-editing my YA fantasy: youtu.be/YUajQLBrZdE
โจ writer envy and book revisions (vlog): youtu.be/cocqNi_WUNs
/ about /
i'm kris (she/her), writer/aspiring author, mostly writing speculative fiction. on this channel i'm documenting my writing process, ongoing projects and general bookish shenanigans โ๏ธ
/ where to find me /
twitter: twitter.com/km_fajardo
instagram: instagram.com/krismfajardo
goodreads: goodreads.com/krismfajardo
storygraph: app.thestorygraph.com/profile/krismfajardo
podcast: youtube.com/channel/UCfI4UTYIb2UjJvV06WY5cWA
music:
๐ง A Band Called Yellow - Summer - thmatc.co/?l=F0F95372
#authortube #writing
BIG thank you to all the writers who shared pieces. I was honoured to read your work! sorry I couldnโt get to more but Iโll try my best to do another video in the future, if thereโs interest. please be considerate in the comments to fellow writers, etc etc โ๏ธ
โ๏ธ featured writers
1 bumblebee
2 Adam Fishkin
3 Livy
timestamps:
0:00 intro
1:12 important disclaimers
2:16 submission 1 (CW - physical aggression)
3:07 initial thoughts, verb tense, phrasing, colloquialisms
7:38 sensory detail, simplifying, figurative language
13:04 imagery and description
15:55 shifting POV and dialogue rhythm
19:04 submission 2 - tone and form
24:11 submission 3
24:52 openings and spooky vibes
26:47 characterization and relationships
29:40 example edit and character voice
37:30 share your thoughts!
_____
more videos:
โจ line-editing my YA fantasy: youtu.be/YUajQLBrZdE
โจ writer envy and book revisions (vlog): youtu.be/cocqNi_WUNs
/ about /
i'm kris (she/her), writer/aspiring author, mostly writing speculative fiction. on this channel i'm documenting my writing process, ongoing projects and general bookish shenanigans โ๏ธ
/ where to find me /
twitter: twitter.com/km_fajardo
instagram: instagram.com/krismfajardo
goodreads: goodreads.com/krismfajardo
storygraph: app.thestorygraph.com/profile/krismfajardo
podcast: youtube.com/channel/UCfI4UTYIb2UjJvV06WY5cWA
music:
๐ง A Band Called Yellow - Summer - thmatc.co/?l=F0F95372
#authortube #writing
