kris | KM Fajardo | so my writer friend read my YA fantasy. *reacting to feedback on my book* !! (act one) @KrisMF | Uploaded April 2022 | Updated October 2024, 6 hours ago.
this manuscript deserved to be roasted WAY harder. (thank you, danica!!!)

📣 I’ll be on Autumn Ashleigh's channel, with some other amazing authortubers, on FRI APRIL 29TH @ 7pm EST for a live writing sprint to cap off Camp NANO. set a reminder and come join us!
➡ youtube.com/watch?v=5dBBppXt_WU

timestamps:
0:00 intro
3:17 protagonist first impressions
6:45 zuko with less early season anger
8:00 cast dynamics & weak internal conflicts...
13:23 on creating character friction
15:01 lore & backstory confusion
17:08 more constructive feedback
18:51 on raising stakes & pushing conflict
22:00 one year after drafting - how do I feel?

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more videos:
✨ revisions & tempted by a new WIP (vlog): youtu.be/qmHhbtPW7mQ
✨ edit with me - YA fantasy prologue: youtu.be/a-H5ZAmFwiM

/ about /
i'm kris (she/her), a Toronto-based designer/aspiring author, mostly writing speculative fiction. on this channel i'm documenting my writing process, ongoing projects and general bookish shenanigans ☀️

/ where to find me /
twitter: twitter.com/km_fajardo
instagram: instagram.com/krismfajardo
goodreads: goodreads.com/krismfajardo
storygraph: app.thestorygraph.com/profile/krismfajardo
podcast: youtube.com/channel/UCfI4UTYIb2UjJvV06WY5cWA

music:
🎧 Yasper - Good Friends chll.to/c84c63b2

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