Around the CampfireWhich point of view should you choose for your story? First person, second person, third person limited, or third person omniscient? Each has its own strengths and weaknesses, and knowing them will help you choose!
This video focuses on the basics to help you make that decision, but I’ll be making a video for each POV over the next few months, so keep an eye out!
Thanks again to @ManCarryingThing for helping with the skits!
How to Choose a Point of View (feat. @ManCarryingThing)Around the Campfire2021-09-30 | Which point of view should you choose for your story? First person, second person, third person limited, or third person omniscient? Each has its own strengths and weaknesses, and knowing them will help you choose!
This video focuses on the basics to help you make that decision, but I’ll be making a video for each POV over the next few months, so keep an eye out!
Thanks again to @ManCarryingThing for helping with the skits!
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:23 - First Person 04:58 - Second Person 06:18 - Third Limited 10:07 - Third Omniscient 13:48 - ChoosingAvoid White Room Syndrome: 6 Ways to Write Better DescriptionsAround the Campfire2023-09-18 | White room syndrome is an easy pitfall for any writer to run into, especially when you’re describing a secondary world. So, it’s important to understand the problem and know how to write setting descriptions—and how to avoid situations when there’s not enough in your writing. But not too much, of course. That’s a whole other can of worms.
We invited author B.H. Pierce to help us talk about white room syndrome, writing vivid descriptions, and writing with aphantasia (an inability to visualize images in one’s mind).
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If you're new to the world of publishing, it can be difficult to know which path is right for you: is it better to publish traditionally, or self-publish your work? Wall Street Journal and USA Today bestselling author Ann Christy has over ten years of experience with both, so we invited her to join us and talk about the pros and cons of each approach!
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Bookshop: bookshop.org/shop/campfirewriting Support local, independent bookstores (and Campfire) by buying books on our Bookshop page.What Makes a Conlang Bad? | The Goals of Constructed LanguagesAround the Campfire2023-05-02 | Perhaps the most important thing you can do when beginning a new conlang is to set a goal for it. Without one, it can become quite difficult for your language to do what you need it to. As an example, let’s check out David Peterson’s first conlang: Megdevi. It had a lot of awesome ideas, but ultimately he abandoned the project. Let’s talk about why, and how you can avoid the same fate for your conlangs. Check out Campfire, a customizable tool for writers to plan, organize, and share their writing: campfirewriting.com
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We teamed up with @Artifexian to help us explain how to make custom calendars for your stories. We cover everything from how celestial bodies can impact the months, to how culture can determine the way they’re named. Of course, there’s only so much we could cover in this short video, so check out the additional resources below—and if you have any tips for would-be custom calendar-makers, drop those in the comments!
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//CHAPTERS// 0:00 Introduction 0:22 The 3 Types of Calendars 1:34 Creating a Calendar 3:35 How Culture Impacts Calendars 5:01 Examples of Fictional Calendars 6:22 Summary
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This video is where we held our 10K subscriber contest! 🎉 The contest is over, and the reward claimed by the winner. Thank you to everyone who participated, we had a great time chatting with you about your maps in the comments!
//ADDITIONAL RESOURCES// Not sure how to make a map? I was using Affinity Designer, but that’s a little complicated compared to some of the alternatives. We compared a few popular tools: campfirewriting.com/learn/azgaars-vs-inkarnate-vs-wonderdraft
The India / Bangladesh Land Boundary Agreement: https://www.brookings.edu/blog/up-front/2020/05/12/sambandh-blog-india-and-bangladesh-exchanging-border-enclaves-re-connecting-with-new-citizens/
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Try using McKee’s thematic square to improve your own writing! Having a better understanding not only of your theme, but also the characters and plot surrounding it, will only help you write better stories.
Also, check out Campfire, the software Ann used to write her new book: campfirewriting.com
//VIDEO CREDITS// Script and audio by Adam Bassett: twitter.com/adamcbassett Editing by @4bs_ben Thumbnail, character animations, and additional editing by Cole Field: instagram.com/acolefield
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#writingtips #story #theme #authortube #booktubeHow to Draw Fantasy Maps: CoastlinesAround the Campfire2023-01-10 | You don’t have to be an artist to draw interesting maps. Too many fantasy maps have long, straight coasts that suspiciously mirror the edges of the pages they were initially printed on. Break up your coastlines with bays, rivers, islands, and peninsulas!
This was a bit of a shorter video because we’re preparing to ✨publish a book ✨ and Cole’s been busy helping to illustrate some things for that. Special thanks to Ben, who made this video possible.
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Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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There's plenty more to discuss about scripts beyond what we had time for here, so if you're interested to learn more, check out the links to other episodes of Story Tips below. Or, if you're already well-versed in conlanging, drop a comment telling us some tips of your own!
Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
Special thanks to Slorany for helping draft the script and providing some of their resources for conlanging (see them below!)
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//REFERENCES// An interactive IPA chart: ipachart.com
Conlangs: How to Construct a Language MIT lecture notes: https://ocw.mit.edu/courses/linguistics-and-philosophy/24-917-conlangs-how-to-construct-a-language-fall-2018/lecture-notes/
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There's (generally speaking) five things that every scene in your story needs. Each is a kind of goal. Is the scene meant to create conflict, expand on the setting, or endear us to the characters? It could be all three. The most important thing is that you understand the goal and keep pushing the plot forward with each scene.
Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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//REFERENCES// Antimicrobial Functions of Spices by Jennifer Billing and Paul W. Sherman (PDF): https://canvas.harvard.edu/files/4435842/download?download_frd=1
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There's plenty more to discuss beyond what we had time for here, so if you're interested to learn more, check out the links below. Or, if you;re already well-versed in conlanging, drop a comment telling us some tips of your own!
Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
Special thanks to Slorany for helping draft the script and providing some of their resources for conlanging (see them below!)
Conlangs: How to Construct a Language MIT lecture notes: https://ocw.mit.edu/courses/linguistics-and-philosophy/24-917-conlangs-how-to-construct-a-language-fall-2018/lecture-notes/
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Naming languages are commonly found in books where the author presents a sliver of a language-a few terms or phrases to help sell the worldbuilding or as part of the plot. Creating one of your own is easier than you might think!
Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
Special thanks to Slorany for helping draft the script and providing some of their resources for conlanging (see them below!)
Check out Campfire, a customizable tool for writers to plan, organize, and share their work: campfirewriting.com
//REFERENCES// An interactive IPA chart: ipachart.com
Conlangs: How to Construct a Language MIT lecture notes: https://ocw.mit.edu/courses/linguistics-and-philosophy/24-917-conlangs-how-to-construct-a-language-fall-2018/lecture-notes/
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Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:43 - Closeness Spectrum 02:56 - Consistency 04:17 - Multiple Perspectives 07:50 - Switching PerspectivesHow to Name Characters FasterAround the Campfire2022-03-09 | It can be hard to name characters in your story, but it doesn't have to be. Names follow fairly simple conventions, like how English names are usually organized with a first, middle, and last name. The characters in your novel might not use that naming system, but it's likely they'll have some kind of consistency, and establishing a way to name characters might help you out in the long run!
Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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Script and VO by Adam Bassett Animation by Cole Field
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// Introduction - 00:00 Character Likeability - 00:56 Ferris Bueller - 01:55 The Fault In Our Stars - 05:00 Exposition - 07:46Does Writing Advice Work?Around the Campfire2021-11-01 | Does writing advice make you less creative? Does it make you a hack? Will using popular methods turn your story into a soulless carbon copy of Star Wars?
No. That's all silly.
Of course, writing advice works, but there are some things you should know to make it work BETTER.
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:23 - Subjectivity 03:29 - FundamentalsWriting a Book - Plotting & SchedulingAround the Campfire2021-08-18 | Are you ready to write a book?
It may take some plotting before you get started, which can be daunting if you've never done it before. First, you need a story seed, and then you can choose which route you want to take.
I suggest Brandon Sanderson's bracket-plotting method for beginners over strict plot structures like The Hero's Journey.
Once you're done plotting, you'll want to develop a writing schedule to keep yourself honest. Then, write!
Hopefully, all these tips on how to write a book will help you finish your first draft!
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:47 - Phase 3: Planning 04:24 - Plotting Methods 08:27 - Phase 4: Write 11:43 - In ReviewQuest for the Golden Plunger | Audiobook Sample Ch. 4Around the Campfire2021-08-09 | Check out Jackson's Book, The Quest for the Golden Plunger: The Misadventures of the Adventure Rangers!
First, you need to understand your own writing tendencies and adjust accordingly. Are you a pantser, plotter, or somewhere in between?
Then, you need to find a way to stay organized while you write to be as efficient as possible. When you're setting out on a task as large as writing a book, you want to save yourself from as much work as possible.
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:18 - Phase 1: Strategy 03:51 - Phase 2: Organization 05:34 - Organizational Tools 07:55 - Manuscript EditorsQuest for the Golden Plunger | Audiobook Sample Ch. 1Around the Campfire2021-07-09 | Check out Jackson's Book, The Quest for the Golden Plunger: The Misadventures of the Adventure Rangers!
Is active voice better than passive voice? Usually, but not always!
Instead of defaulting to active voice, you should understand how it functions in context. That gives you the power to make active decisions about the pacing and flow of your prose!
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:19 - #1 - Active Voice 05:24 - #2 - Correct Order 06:54 - #3 - Establish Details 09:31 - #4 - Break the RulesWriting Endings | Arrival, The Dark Knight, Adventure TimeAround the Campfire2021-04-28 | It can be hard to stick the landing, but the key is to find a balance between predictable and surprising without breaking any promises you make to the audience. What are promises? That's actually a harder question...
We're talking about endings, so here are your spoiler warnings with time stamps to skip: Arrival (11:04 - 16:31) The Dark Knight, Thor Ragnarok, Frozen 2 (10:19 - 10:40)
Ocean's Twelve (15:21 - 15:49)
Here are some things whose endings we talk about vaguely, but I wouldn't call spoilers: Adventure Time, The Sopranos, Parks and Rec, Breaking Bad, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Legally Blonde
Check out Biblaridion's video on Arrival and how language potentially shapes thought! youtu.be/vJUEsOjcGfE
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:33 - What does an ending need? 03:18 - Archetypal Endings 05:26 - Promises, Progress, Payoff 11:07 - Twist Endings 16:55 - Serial Endings 20:56 - Leave them Thinking 22:36 - In Review 23:48 - The Quest for the Golden PlungerWriting an Adaptation | Godzilla, Thor, ATLA, The Lion KingAround the Campfire2021-03-31 | We love to retell stories. Something about taking something we've seen and bending it to our own creative whim delights us to no end, but sometimes retellings can get a bad rep. They're always compared against the source material. How do you write a retelling, adaptation, or reboot?
From Godzilla vs. Kong to Thor: Ragnarok, Hollywood loves to reboot, adapt, and retell. They aren't always great at it, but we can learn from what their stories and what authors like Neil Gaiman have done.
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//MUSIC// Onion (Prod. by Lukrembo) Biscuit (Prod. by Lukrembo) Balloon (Prod. by Lukrembo)
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:27 - Reboots, Adaptations, and Retellings 02:44 - Why write a RAR? 04:55 - How do you write a RAR? 09:21 - Originality 11:34 - Audience Expectations 12:24 - Godzilla 16:08 - Thor 19:01 - Story Scope 22:08 - Story NatureGimmicks: Marvelous or Maleficent? | Wandavision *NO SPOILERS*Around the Campfire2021-03-03 | Wandavision leans hard on its gimmick, but is that a bad thing?
What is a gimmick? A gimmick is something designed to attract attention, and gimmicks aren't inherently good or bad, like most things for writing a screenplay or writing a novel. They provide marketing value, but they can also distract from the plot and feel cheap if you don't pull them off.
Don't worry, this video is spoiler-free. I tried to mostly use clips from Wandavision's trailer. I am excited to see where the series ends, though. Wandavision episode 8 is right around the corner!
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//MUSIC// Onion (Prod. by Lukrembo) Biscuit (Prod. by Lukrembo) Balloon (Prod. by Lukrembo)
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:16 - What is a gimmick? 02:41 - Does the gimmick impact the story? 05:18 - Does the gimmick attract attention? 08:21 - Do stories need gimmicks? 11:09 - In ConclusionThe Power of Wonder in Writing | The Mandalorian & Doctor Who *NO SPOILERS*Around the Campfire2021-02-17 | The Mandalorian isn't a perfect show, but it sure is a wonderful one.
Wonder in writing and storytelling is a fickle thing. You know it when you see it, but is there a way to replicate it? (Spoiler alert: There isn't, but you sure can try)
With so many people watching the second season of the Mandalorian and asking, "will there be a Mandalorian season 3?" We decided to explore what makes the show so special, and it's not just that little Grogu fella.
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//MUSIC// Onion (Prod. by Lukrembo) Jackson's Bubbles by Levi Johnson
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:39 - Doctor Who 01:51 - What is Wonder? 03:23 - The Mandalorian 04:17 - Producing Wonder 07:02 - A Trip to the StoreFight, Flight, and a Firm Handshake | Avatar & Studio GhibliAround the Campfire2021-02-03 | Studio Ghibli and Hayao Miyazaki live in the hearts of people around the world. For many, these movies hold tremendous nostalgic value, but the movies have something else going for them beyond nostalgia. The way Hayao Miyazaki chooses to resolve conflict makes these movies stick out from your basic animated childhood movie.
Check out our video on the first act of the Hero's Journey: youtu.be/opaVjyrLl9U
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//MUSIC// Onion (Prod. by Lukrembo) Bread (Prod. by Lukrembo) LATENCY by Mystery Mammal
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:33 - The First Two Ways 01:26 - The Third Way 02:04 - Avatar: The Last Airbender 03:08 - Princess Mononoke 04:01 - Understanding Motivations 05:32 - The Different Ways and Themes 08:27 - Miyazaki and the Third Way 09:16 - Good vs. Evil 10:51 - A New PathWriting Character Struggles | The Queens Gambit *SPOILER FREE*Around the Campfire2021-01-21 | Check out Campfire—It's the perfect tool for planning and writing your novel, screenplay, or TTRPG. Plus, it's free to use!
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//MUSIC// Onion (Prod. by Lukrembo) Bread (Prod. by Lukrembo)
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:19 - Obstacles 02:07 - Make Things Harder 02:57 - Beth's Conflicts 03:49 - Avoiding Linear Plots 05:42 - Choosing the Right Obstacle 06:46 - Predictably Unpredictable 07:33 - Interweaving Multiple Conflicts 07:54 - Engaging the AudiencePixars Soul: Playing with TensionAround the Campfire2021-01-06 | Pixar's Soul is a wonderful movie about life and death and everything in-between, but instead of Pixar's usual heart wrenching tactics, this movie about death is somehow their most hopeful. How? The way they choose to resolve tension!
*SPOILER ALERT* This video contains some light spoilers. Most of the plot stuff comes from the trailer, but there are a couple of jokes and clips that warrant a warning.
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:02 - Keeping it Light 01:22 - Types of Tension 02:53 - Comedic Build, Comedic Release 03:21 - Dramatic Build, Dramatic Release 03:55 - Comedic Build, Dramatic Release 05:42 - Dramatic Build, Comedic Release 06:12 - Undermining the Sad Stuff 07:40 - Tension Wants to be Released 09:17 - Being Playful 09:49 - OutroHow to Worldbuild Harsh Settings w/ Worldbuilding Magazine | Frank Herberts DuneAround the Campfire2020-12-16 | Worldbuilding isn't just about countries and politics. It's about making a world that feels like its own character. Let's look at some real-world examples of harsh conditions to inspire our own worldbuilding!
Thanks to Worldbuilding Magazine for helping out with this video! Check out their most recent issue on worldbuilding survival: worldbuildingmagazine.com
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:41 - Water 03:11 - Food 04:07 - Shelter 05:34 - Research 06:09 - Other Extreme Environments 07:03 - Arctic 07:54 - Desert 09:03 - Forest 09:48 - Marshes 10:53 - Mountains 11:54 - A Passion in the Desert 12:36 - Settings & CharactersEditing Writing w/ @ProWritingAidTV | Self Editing after NaNoWriMoAround the Campfire2020-12-02 | Braving a self-edit of your novel? Here is a list of things to look out for like passive voice, weak verbs, sticky words, and more!
ProWritingAid didn't pay us to make this video (although we are affiliates). We just wanted to share a way to help ease the burden of self-editing.
Next time, we'll get back to the regular writing and worldbuilding advice!
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 02:07 - Line Editing 03:28 - Style 05:29 - Sticky Sentences 08:46 - Readability 10:07 - Overused Words 11:03 - Diction 11:51 - Self EditingWorldbuilding 101 | Game of Thrones & Black PantherAround the Campfire2020-11-16 | How do you start worldbuilding?
The key to worldbuilding is the story comes first. Identify the things your world needs to meet your story, not the other way around. Learn how authors like George R. R. Martin were inspired to build their worlds! We explore Westeros from Game of Thrones, Wakanda from Black Panther, the Forgotten Realms, and more!
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:14 - Capturing a Feeling 01:01 - Worldbuilding 101 02:04 - Initial Ideas 03:42 - Channeling Inspiration 06:37 - Research 08:23 - Worldbuilding with Purpose 09:43 - Remembering Your Goal 11:26 - Capturing a Feeling (Reprise)Dealing with Writing Anxiety | Editing, Feedback, & Avoiding TriggersAround the Campfire2020-11-02 | It's NaNoWriMo! For the next month, writers around the world are writing novels and getting anxious about hitting word count goals. We want to share some ways to help alleviate the stress and anxiety that can come with writing!
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//CREDITS// Script - Levi Johnson Video Editing - Cole Field & Levi Johnson Animations - Cole Field Script Editing - Jackson Dickert
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:11 - Fundamentals 03:04 - Get Feedback 04:15 - Find the Flow 06:31 - Self Editing 07:43 - Help Right Now 11:00 - Avoid Triggers 12:08 - Blaze X NaNo ContestCampfire Blaze Q&A #1Around the Campfire2020-10-15 | Join us this evening as we build a story in Campfire Blaze from scratch while answering any questions you may have about the program! Come hang out!
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--About Campfire Technology-- Video essays on writing and a goof here and there. Hosted by Levi Johnson.
We release new videos every Monday at 12 PM EST. We dive into topics intended to help make a writer's job easier like how to create characters, plot stories, and build your world. Our goal is to make this channel your one-stop shop for free writing advice, writing tips, and showcase the best tools to help you write your novel.
Check out our software, Campfire Pro! Designed to be a revolutionary tool for writers to plan out their stories, Campfire provides its users with character development, plot design, and worldbuilding tools. Campfire has exactly what novelists, screenwriters, and TTRPG players need to go from the seed of an idea to a detailed, organized blueprint that’s ready to be executed.How to Write Dialogue | The WitcherAround the Campfire2020-10-05 | Dialogue is an art of its own that takes years to master, but these 9 tips for better dialogue will help you write your book or screenplay! But if you're looking for bad dialogue, you can check out Netflix's The Witcher.
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//CREDITS// Script - Levi Johnson and Creative Writing Now Host & Video Editor - Levi Johnson Script Editor - Adam Bassett Executive Producer - Jackson Dickert
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:47 - 1. Dialogue Tags 01:35 - 2. Unique Voices 03:57 - 3. Summarize 04:36 - 4. Mix Dialogue and Summary 05:21 - 5. Indirection 06:30 - 6. Silence 07:44 - 7. Listen 08:36 - 8. Trim It Down 09:35 - 9. Perform ItHow to Choose Between a Hard or Soft Magic System w/ @James Tullos | Star WarsAround the Campfire2020-09-21 | Magic is a central defining feature of fantasy, but the way you build your system has four major effects on your story. Figure out what you need to know before choosing between a hard or soft magic system!
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//CREDITS// Script - Levi Johnson and James Tullos Host - Levi Johnson Video Editor - Parker Brown Script Editor and Executive Producer - Jackson Dickert
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:38 - Hard vs Soft Magic 02:41 - Theme and Wonder 05:15 - Audience 08:01 - Campfire Blaze AnnouncementExploring Theme through Character - Steven Universe Deep DiveAround the Campfire2020-09-07 | How do you write with a theme in mind? How do you make a statement with your writing? The key to theme is your characters and their flaws!
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:35 - Want & Need 01:28 - Fatal Flaw 02:50 - Steven Universe 04:12 - Pearl 05:30 - Amethyst 06:43 - Steven 08:09 - Connecting the Dots 09:10 - Making a StatementMaster Pacing in Writing - How fast should a story move?Around the Campfire2020-08-24 | Pacing is key to creating a pleasant reading experience for your audience. Macro and micro are two important types of pacing to balance as you write!
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//CREDITS// Script and Host - Levi Johnson Video Editor - Parker Brown Script Editor and Executive Producer - Jackson Dickert
//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:19 - Pacing 01:33 - Macro Pacing 02:30 - Subplots 03:31 - Cliffhangers 04:35 - Subplots (but the bad kind) 06:00 - Micro Pacing 06:36 - Sentence Length 07:35 - DialogueAvoiding Deus Ex Machina - How to Create a Satisfying PayoffAround the Campfire2020-08-10 | Learning how to properly set up and payoff plot devices will help you prevent writing yourself into a deus ex machina. Chekhov's gun is an old rule of thumb, but we can take it a little farther!
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 01:21 - Why Use Setup and Payoff? 02:41 - Case Study: Die Hard 03:22 - Inverted Chekhov's Gun & Mistborn 05:46 - Worldbuilding 07:12 - BracketingHow to Write More | Forming a New HabitAround the Campfire2020-07-27 | Writing requires constant focus over an extended amount of time, and the best way to achieve long-term focus is by establishing a new habit.
Check out @CGPGrey. He has an entire podcast dedicated independent content creation that is a treasure trove of knowledge: https://www.relay.fm/cortex
There are a ton of distracting app blockers out there with different features. I would look around and see what you want out of one. Parental Control apps are also a great option since they can block apps and websites on your phone.
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//VIDEO CHAPTERS// 00:00 - Introduction 00:11 - Making a New Habit 01:29 - Finding Time 03:04 - Address Roadblocks 04:30 - Distractions 05:45 - Goals 07:01 - Things to Avoid