Writing progression fantasy: tips from Will Wight (Cradle) Jed Herne 2021-12-20 | Watch our previous two chats with Will:1) youtube.com/watch?v=HHo5FHQIaP8 2) youtube.com/watch?v=anAKvzfEhdI Will Wight (author of Cradle) returns to the podcast to discuss the perils of success and his experience of dealing with criticism. Support Wizards, Warriors, & Words on Patreon for bonus content: patreon.com/wizardswarriorswordsEmail us your questions: wizardswarriorswords@gmail.comFor more about our hosts and our books:Dyrk Ashton: paternusbooks.comMichael R. Fletcher: http://michaelrfletcher.comRob J. Hayes: robjhayes.co.ukJed Herne: jedherne.com
The Secret to Writing Emotional Fantasy Stories Jed Herne 2024-10-15 | Watch my full deep dive on writing emotion in your fantasy novel: youtube.com/watch?v=IAAm_EAJiQs
9 Ending Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make Jed Herne 2024-10-12 | Want me to help you write a great ending? Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/bootcamp-cohort-4⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:30 - Poor payoffs03:24 - Not planning backwards 06:14 - Making the climax easy08:40 - Winning through luck10:56 - Not resolving the core conflict16:40 - Fizzle-out endings18:10 - Not aligning internal and external journeys20:30 - Overly neat wrap-ups22:28 - A weak closing imageWant to write a great first chapter in your fantasy novel? Check out my First Chapter Mastery course: firstchaptermastery.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY INTERACTIVE FANTASY NOVEL:Siege of Treboulain: choiceofgames.com/siege-of-treboulain
Do This to Write Better Fantasy Side Characters Jed Herne 2024-10-09 | Want me to help you write better fantasy characters? Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/jeds-fantasy-bootcamp
How to Outline Your Fantasy Novel (The Hourglass Method) Jed Herne 2024-10-06 | Join my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/jeds-outlining-programInside the program, I'll help you build your outline so that you can write a captivating fantasy novel. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:40 - Why outline?02:55 - The purpose of outlining07:02 - The Hourglass Method07:29 - Exploring the suburb15:32 - Finding your story's core16:29 - Premise19:40 - Theme23:11 - Putting it all together26:06 - Character arcs33:52 - Structuring your plot📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details
10 Best Ways to Start Your Fantasy Novel Jed Herne 2024-09-15 | Get my First Chapter Mastery course: bit.ly/1st-chapter-courseI asked 400 fantasy readers: "What's the best way to start a fantasy novel?" In this video, I react to the top 10 most common responses. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:39 - Introduce the magic system03:16 - Start with the villain09:12 - Foreshadowing11:09 - Set the tone13:16 - Prologues16:32 - Dialogue20:08 - Mystery23:16 - Worldbuilding25:29 - Introduce the main character29:26 - In media res📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details
10 Worst Ways to Start Your Fantasy Novel Jed Herne 2024-09-08 | Learn how to write a great first chapter in your fantasy novel: firstchaptermastery.com⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - I surveyed 367 readers00:30 - Too many characters02:05 - Meaningless action06:07 - Prologues10:37 - Dream sequences13:17 - Made-up words16:44 - Characters waking up18:54 - Confusing setups21:55 - Irrelevant characters/scenes24:12 - Slow pacing27:28 - Info-dumping
7 Signs Readers Will Love Your Magic System Jed Herne 2024-08-09 | Get my free 'Magic Limitations, Weaknesses, & Consequences' inspiration resource here: jedherne.com/magiclimits⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:30 - Does it have this effect?01:45 - Creative solutions02:52 - Interesting limitations, weaknesses, and consequences05:47 - Tree Trunk Technique08:07 - The Pokemon Effect10:55 - Unity with your Triangle of Story15:02 - Originality📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details
15 Advanced Worldbuilding Techniques I Learned from Publishing 5 Novels Jed Herne 2024-07-27 | Get my free character writing course: jedherne.com/5-day-courseGet ProWritingAid (10% discount with my affiliate link): jedherne.com/prowritingaid⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:21 - FIRES OF THE DEAD00:33 - Build unique magic with limitations04:28 - Tailor your magic to create conflict07:19 - Create unique worlds through combination09:10 - ACROSS THE BROKEN STARS10:20 - Build depth with synthesis13:51 - Adjust your world to improve your plot 15:59 - Leave some things mysterious17:37 - THE THUNDER HEIST18:26 - Originality comes from a fusion of curiosities22:10 - Consider the emotion 23:57 - Use non-visual senses26:43 - SIEGE OF TREBOULAIN27:14 - Extend the world past your story29:34 - Give us some rays of sunshine31:36 - Liquid, not solid32:44 - KINGDOM OF DRAGONS34:01 - Use conflicting versions of history35:43 - Use the plot to explore the world36:41 - Enrich the background✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
How to Expand a Fantasy Novel That’s Too Short (3 Steps) Jed Herne 2024-07-18 | Join my free 5-day course to write better fantasy characters: jedherne.com/5-day-courseWatch my 70-minute deep dive on character arcs: youtu.be/wfoV-e7RMRo?si=fcxiDryVo--MVdjv⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:54 - Step 106:01 - Step 210:59 - Step 3✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
6 First Page Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer Makes Jed Herne 2024-06-25 | After reviewing hundreds of opening pages, here's the most common mistakes I've found. Join my First Chapter Mastery program: firstchaptermastery.com(This includes a recording of my First Chapter Critique workshop)⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:23 - Clickbait first sentences04:29 - Low Rate of Revelation10:31 - No taste of USP15:53 - Not understanding the 6 Opening Options26:25 - Overwhelming readers 28:15 - Thinking this has to be perfect✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/sceneVideo edited by @the_fools_tale
Joe Abercrombie Shows Me How to Write PERFECT Character Introductions Jed Herne 2024-06-09 | I sit down with Joe Abercrombie to look at his opening chapters from 'A Little Hatred.'Join my First Chapter Mastery program: firstchaptermastery.com(This includes a recording of my First Chapter Critique workshop)⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:40 - Joe's philosophy on 1st chapters01:34 - Picking the right character to start with04:07 - How to write a great opening sentence09:40 - Does your setting matter?13:17 - Foreshadowing17:17 - Write in layers18:50 - Developing unique character voices21:39 - Joe's planning method27:41 - Moving to Savine's chapter30:08 - Dialogue vs description35:18 - Use worldbuilding to build character36:51 - How to build complex characters41:37 - Use side characters47:26 - Impactful introductions50:53 - Joe's biggest tips for writers📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
5 Conflict Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer Makes Jed Herne 2024-06-02 | Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: http://jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:56 - Pointless questions03:09 - Not using conflict to reveal character05:08 - Not targeting your character's weaknesses07:38 - Repetitive conflict12:11 - Not modulating your conflicts✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
How to Write Fantasy Character Arcs Better than 99% of Writers Jed Herne 2024-05-24 | This is a full guide to writing amazing character arcs in your fantasy novel. Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline (Applications for Cohort 4 close on Oct 14th)Get my '5 Days to Better Fantasy Characters' course: character-course.carrd.co⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00:00 - Introduction00:02:00 - Common mistakes00:10:38 - 5 core arc components00:24:37 - Writing a positive arc00:26:46 - Writing a negative arc00:30:01 - Writing a flat arc00:34:05 - Outlining makes everything easier00:36:11 - Theme00:38:57 - Character arcs in a series00:41:50 - Integrating arcs with plot00:44:13 - (1) The hook00:53:58 - (2) Inciting incident00:57:24 - (3) New realm00:59:28 - (4) Antagonist threatens01:00:40 - (5) Midpoint01:04:18 - (6) More pressure 01:06:57 - (7) Darkest low01:09:05 - (8) Climax01:10:07 - (9) Closing image✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
This 1-Minute Habit Helped Me Write 1 Million Words Jed Herne 2024-05-06 | You can use the principles in the video to make your own writing tracker, or you can get the one I've spent 6+ years refining here: jedherne.com/tracker⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:37 - The psychology of motivation02:17 - Gamify your writing03:42 - The Seinfeld Rule05:14 - The One-Up Principle07:16 - The Belief Booster✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
6 Magic System Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make Jed Herne 2024-04-26 | Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:19 - Everything's a nail01:39 - No consideration of limits06:05 - Thinking you need a hard magic system10:55 - Not integrating with the triangle of story16:28 - The sloppy buffet18:42 - Instant mastery✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL:Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline🚀 BECOME A FASTER WRITER:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene
10 Things Fantasy Readers Love (Writing Advice) Jed Herne 2024-03-21 | I asked 348 fantasy readers the #1 thing they LOVE to read.Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:23 - Meaningful consequences & sacrifices02:45 - Authentic Relationships and Romance05:35 - Exploration of Themes08:45 - Morally Grey Characters11:38 - Diverse and Creative Creatures14:02 - The Found Family Trope15:39 - Plots Twists16:56 - Immersive World-Building19:49 - Innovative Magic Systems20:50 - Relatable, Complex Characters Who Grow📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link.Video edited by @the_fools_tale
10 Things Fantasy Readers Hate (Writing Advice) Jed Herne 2024-03-13 | I asked 348 fantasy readers about their least favourite story elements. Watch this next: youtu.be/_E-IAa3g604?si=QmYSRi9DKR_NYYFUApply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 – Intro00:32 – Modern language & anachronistic terms02:14 – Slow pacing and filler content05:02 – Forced humour07:56 – Shallow magic systems11:42 – Miscommunication as conflict13:24 – Info-dumps15:41 – Poor character development 18:47 – Gratuitous sex and violence21:01 – Poorly executed tropes25:04 – Forced romance✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-detailsVideo edited by @the_fools_tale
Just Get Bored, and Youll Write Better Fantasy Books Jed Herne 2024-03-06 | In a world of endless stimulation, here's how boredom will elevate your writing.Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Intro01:09 - Understand the two outcomes of boredom04:05 - The Neil Gaiman gaze05:53 - Become a watchful waiter08:18 - Get off the cocaine pellet dispenser11:44 - Occasionally select the low stimulation option14:26 - Fill the boredom with notes & ideas📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
Your Fantasy Characters Need 4 Identities Jed Herne 2024-02-28 | This simple technique will add tremendous depth, complexity, and realism to your fantasy characters. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:22 - The four selves00:52 - Bilbo01:51 - Snape02:45 - Gavin Guile03:38 - Logen Ninefingers✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
This 1 Sticky Note Will Save Your Fantasy Novel Jed Herne 2024-02-15 | Get my free 1-page guiding document example: jedherne.com/guideApply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - The problem this solves01:39 - What is this concept?05:36 - How will this save your fantasy novel?07:17 - How to craft this13:22 - Using this to explore further questions🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📜 PLAN YOUR FANTASY NOVEL WITH MY SUPPORT:Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller - distraction-free writing laptop: getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 (use my affiliate link for a 5% discount).ProWritingAid - great editing software: jedherne.com/prowritingaid (use my affiliate link for a 20% discount).🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
20 Sentence Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make Jed Herne 2024-02-03 | This is a full masterclass on writing better sentences in your fantasy novel.Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with my affiliate link): jedherne.com/prowritingaid⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:07 - Time travelling reactions01:01 - Double Negatives01:45 - Incorrect adjective order03:49 - Overindulging on adjectives04:49 - Bubble wrap words08:55 - Incorrect adjective pacing10:38 - Repetitive sentence lengths12:50 - Weird anatomy14:19 - Sentence splices16:07 - Passive voice18:22 - The Ending Bias19:37 - Beige diction21:48 - Anachronistic words24:25 - Ignoring the Oxford comma25:35 - Thoughtless adverbs27:00 - Generic verbs28:08 - Thesaurus brain29:31 - Silly dialogue tags31:40 - Describing what isn't happening32:35 - Weasel words✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed Herne. I'm a fantasy author with four published novels and a video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
7 Antagonist Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make Jed Herne 2024-01-23 | Avoid these mistakes to write better antagonists.Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/fantasy-bootcamp⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:40 - Mistake 107:17 - Mistake 209:16 - Mistake 311:16 - Mistake 413:57 - Mistake 515:30 - Mistake 617:16 - Mistake 7🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedeadKingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
How to Structure a Fantasy Scene (6 Steps) Jed Herne 2024-01-14 | Here's a simple way to structure great scenes in your fantasy novel.Get my Notion Scene template: bit.ly/scene-templateApply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/jed-bootcamp⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:35 - Goal05:30 - Conflict08:19 - Disaster13:33 - Reaction16:07 - Dilemma17:16 - Decision📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details
My Top 5 Books from 2023 (And What They Taught Me) Jed Herne 2024-01-06 | Here's the best novels I read in 2023, along with one key writing lesson I learned from each of them. Follow me on instagram: instagram.com/jedherneWatch my '18 Ways to Write Unique Magic Systems' video: youtu.be/EvqVj3RAK4U?si=3B1N0aqovNYzA2P9Watch my interview with Travis Baldree:⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:07 - Legends & Lattes by Travis Baldree04:42 - Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson07:17 - Breakfast at Tiffany's by Truman Capote11:18 - Jade City by Fonda Lee14:05 - The Disenchanted by Budd Schulberg✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Why You Cant Finish Your Fantasy Novel Jed Herne 2023-12-27 | Here's the four main reasons why you might be struggling. Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/outlining_bootcampGet my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.comGet my word count tracker template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/tracker⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction01:01 - The wrong motivation08:40 - Poor planning17:09 - Relying on discipline, not systems20:59 - No enjoyment practice✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
7 Description Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer Makes Jed Herne 2023-12-20 | After editing 751,000+ words this year, here's the most common description mistakes I see new writers make.Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with this affiliate link): prowritingaid.com/en/App/Purchase?afid=4301&vc=MJS7LSNQGQ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:45 - Over-relying on sight04:43 - Not filtering through the narrator09:36 - Using your first ideas10:30 - Disconnected descriptions15:26 - Repetitive sentence lengths17:08 - Starting sentences with the same words18:23 - Overly abstract descriptions✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:My scene structure Notion template: bit.ly/scene-structure-notionFreewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.ProWritingAid (excellent editing software): prowritingaid.com/en/App/Purchase?afid=4301&vc=MJS7LSNQGQ - use this affiliate link for a 20% discount. 🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
How to Create Emotion in Your Fantasy Novel Jed Herne 2023-12-10 | Here's what I learned from The Emotional Craft of Fiction by Donald Maass. Get the book here: amzn.to/46WqI1U Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/outlining-bootcamp⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:35 - Infuse infodumps with meaning05:05 - Write around the emotion10:51 - Small details create big emotion15:46 - Building an emotional hook20:53 - Ask your characters the right questions24:56 - Create polarity shifts28:03 - Moral elevationStories used as examples:The Lies of Locke Lamora by Scott Lynch - amzn.to/3NnolhQSix of Crows by Leigh Bardugo - amzn.to/3t8iI05Doctor Sleep by Stephen King - amzn.to/41eLrN8The Graveyard Book by Neil Gaiman - amzn.to/46XaFkuWords of Radiance by Brandon Sanderson - amzn.to/3TcoSqCNote: these are affiliate links, which help to support the channel at no extra cost to you.✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with four published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
A writing dream come true Jed Herne 2023-11-28 | You guys did it - Kingdom of Dragons has funded on Kickstarter!Get your deluxe, signed copy here: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=5z8lea
7 Non-Writing Habits That Make You a Better Fantasy Writer Jed Herne 2023-11-25 | Here's the most useful (non-writing) habits that help me write better fantasy novels. Read my new book, Kingdom of Dragons: bit.ly/kingdom-of-dragons-bookJoin my Easy Writing Habits course: bit.ly/easy-writing-habits-courseDownload my 'Movie Database' Notion Template: bit.ly/movie-database⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:14 - Ask why people enjoyed a story01:15 - Note 1 story lesson from every movie02:59 - Say yes05:03 - Chase physical excellence07:42 - Follow your curiosities 09:58 - Real-world research11:23 - Amor Fati✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Jed Herne Reads From Kingdom of Dragons Jed Herne 2023-11-23 | Today, I'm reading the opening three chapters from my new fantasy novel!Get a deluxe, signed edition of the book on Kickstarter for a limited time (ends Nov. 27th): kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=1wy2xu⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - About the book00:53 - Chapter 1 (Zora)07:28 - Chapter 2 (Rovan)21:14 - Chapter 3 (Zora)
10 Main Character Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make Jed Herne 2023-11-18 | Avoid these mistakes and you'll boost your chances of writing a great main character.Read Kingdom of Dragons: jedherne.com/kingdom⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:33 - Lacking emotional truth03:18 - Weak challenges06:33 - No attempt to see them from antagonist's perspective07:45 - One-dimensional11:30 - Not describing through their lens15:04 - Seeing plot as separate from character17:02 - Weak introduction19:11 - Hype without action21:01 - Weak goals23:27 - Doesn't solve the climax✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
This fantasy book has been 20 years in the making... Jed Herne 2023-11-02 | I'm so excited to share Kingdom of Dragons with you :)Get the book here: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=91ywsq
Making the Cover for My Next Fantasy Book (Kingdom of Dragons) Jed Herne 2023-10-28 | Here's a full behind-the-scenes look at my cover design process for Kingdom of Dragons!Get the book on Kickstarter (launches November 2nd): kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=f3ytovA massive thanks to Yasu Matsuoka for his incredible cover art!yasuartstudio.com⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:27 - What’s the book about?01:14 - Starting the cover design02:36 - How to find a cover artist04:50 - Making the design brief05:48 - Sketching initial concepts07:18 - Looking at the first designs08:02 - Interior artwork09:14 - Picking the concept & sending the contract09:53 - Developing the concept10:24 - Coloured draft10:50 - Refining the design11:52 - The big reveal✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
I Helped a Writer Fix His First Chapter Jed Herne 2023-10-25 | Today, I'm helping a new writer edit the first chapter of his fantasy novel.Want me to coach you? Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: http://jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction01:05 - Ethan's goals for the call01:49 - Correct manuscript formatting02:57 - The opening sentence03:23 - Character backstory03:41 - Ground us within the setting04:56 - How can substances impact the magic05:37 - Scene transitions06:36 - Dialogue formatting07:41 - Paragraph spacing11:40 - Action beats with dialogue12:33 - Speaking names in dialogue13:24 - Understanding punctuation16:04 - Fix foreshadowing later in the edit16:48 - How to describe coughing19:24 - The importance of intention20:06 - The Emotion Thesaurus23:02 - Back to expressing coughing in dialogue24:21 - Lean into the apprentice trope25:59 - Formatting interjections26:32 - An industrialising fantasy world29:55 - Writing accents31:29 - Creating a culture inspired by leafcutter ants32:52 - An easy worldbuilding win34:09 - Be cautious about this34:47 - Learning from The Name of the Wind36:03 - Writing songs36:38 - Where the chapter becomes interesting38:22 - Shortening the chapter40:11 - Conveying the magic system43:13 - Dealing with a tone change47:12 - Picking the right character for exposition48:16 - Establishing promises48:41 - Series or standalone?✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Good vs Bad FANTASY Prologues (Writing Advice) Jed Herne 2023-10-18 | I used to hate prologues, but I've changed my mind. This video explains why...Check out my next book (Kingdom of Dragons) on Kickstarter: bit.ly/kingdom-of-dragons-jed⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction01:00 - A Game of Thrones04:29 - Never Die05:17 - Dragon Mage09:39 - The Fellowship of the Ring 12:35 - Mistborn✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
6 Ways to Write Sadder Character Deaths Jed Herne 2023-10-06 | If you're going to kill a character, you might as well make readers cry ...Check out my next novel, Kingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=ac2qkf⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:26 - Deep Relationships01:24 - The Redemptive Arc02:25 - Remove the Protector02:50 - Subvert Expectations04:00 - Promise a Great Future, Then Take It Away04:35 - Fulfill the Character's Arc Perfectly06:26 - Bonus Strategy✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
116 Writers Sent Me Their Magic System Ideas (Best Wins $1,000) Jed Herne 2023-09-30 | I ran a contest to find the best fantasy magic ideas, and here's what happened...Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: http://jedherne.com/outline⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:09 - Round 110:58 - Round 214:10 - Round 329:30 - The Last Round✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
9 Plot Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer Makes Jed Herne 2023-09-14 | I've edited a lot of fantasy novels this year - here's the most common plot mistakes I find. Work with me to outline your fantasy novel: http://jedherne.com/outline ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:35 - Beating the antagonist too early02:13 - Repetitive scene formats04:01 - Passive protagonist05:20 - Weak throughline08:15 - Soggy middle13:56 - Weak consequences15:00 - Misaligning the 3 Ps15:52 - The peter-out ending17:36 - Lucky breaks for the protagonist✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
I Quit My Job to Be a Full-Time Author Jed Herne 2023-09-06 | I finally did it ...Join my habits course: http://easywritinghabits.comApply for my 6-week fantasy outlining bootcamp: jedherne.com/outlineI this video I share my journey to becoming a full-time fantasy author and YouTuber. It's been a wild ride here, and I can't wait to see the next chapter unfold. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:39 - How this happened15:20 - My last day at work16:33 - What has it been like to be full-time?19:03 - 6 principles that made this possible25:49 - What's next?✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
I Talked To Kickstarters Head of Book Publishing Jed Herne 2023-08-28 | Today, I'm interviewing Oriana Leckert - Kickstarter's Head of Publishing. She's worked behind the scenes on some massive campaigns - including Brandon Sanderson's $40m game-changing 'Secret Project.' But it's not just big authors who are winning on Kickstarter, and in our conversation today, she shares principles that any author can use to find success on the platform. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:05 - Working with Brandon Sanderson02:24 - How Sanderson changed Kickstarter04:29 - The power of scarcity05:08 - Are publishers threatened by Kickstarter?08:08 - How Kickstarter helps niche authors10:30 - The biggest mistake new authors make12:04 - Picking your funding target14:41 - How to market a Kickstarter15:51 - How many book Kickstarters succeed?18:10 - Oriana's #1 tip for success✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Strong Female Characters Will Ruin Your Novel (Writing Advice) Jed Herne 2023-08-20 | Here's how you write a great female character that captivates readers.Get my free '100 Character Flaws' guide: jedherne.com/flaws⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:30 - The problem with strong female characters02:30 - Three levels04:16 - The importance of flaws05:40 - Compelling character arcs07:00 - A worthy antagonist07:34 - Multi-dimensional08:37 - Strength beyond muscles✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
18 Ways to Write Unique Magic Systems Jed Herne 2023-08-09 | Here's 18 techniques for creating unique magic systems that make your fantasy novel stand out from the crowd. Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:19 - Relate to social status00:41 - Food based01:43 - Place specific 02:12 - Core emotion02:47 - Group reliant03:08 - Seasonal03:45 - Limits04:32 - Modern tech05:55 - Memory manipulation06:53 - Art based07:18 - Limited use07:54 - Backwards from consequence08:36 - Ancestral 09:26 - Sacrifice10:02 - Inter personal transfer10:27 - Natural phenomenon11:00 - Astronomical alignments11:27 - Niche interest✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Worldbuilding: How to Write Fantasy Setting Descriptions Jed Herne 2023-08-02 | Read my free book, '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing.' jedherne.com/lessonsFollow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneIn today's video, I share my 7-step process for writing immersive setting descriptions in a fantasy novel. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:20 - Define your purpose01:42 - Filter through character02:58 - Focus on the vivid & unique05:00 - All 5 senses06:39 - Progress plot & character07:31 - Weave delivery systems08:35 - Make the mundane specific09:56 - Example setting description✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Good vs Bad FANTASY Dialogue (Writing Advice) Jed Herne 2023-07-21 | If you're a fantasy writer looking to level up your writing, apply for my 1-on-1 Story Coaching program here: jedherne.com/coachingIn this video, I analyse good and bad dialogue scenes from The Rings of Power, The Lord of the Rings, Eragon, and Narnia - all to help you write better dialogue in your fantasy novel. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:23 - What defines BAD fantasy dialogue?02:17 - What defines GOOD fantasy dialogue?04:59 - Special guests05:42 - The Rings of Power07:35 - The Chronicles of Narnia09:58 - Eragon12:54 - The Lord of the Rings✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
These 7 Fantasy Tropes Work Every Time Jed Herne 2023-07-12 | Here's some of my favourite fantasy plot devices and tropes. Let me know your top tropes in the comments!Enter my $1,000 Magic System contest: youtube.com/watch?v=F0vDbqMBWyE⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 – Introduction 01:14 – Character Campfire Building 03:59 – Wistful Gaze for Adventure 05:43 – Corrupting Magic Item 08:51 – Magical Loopholes 11:53 – The Mentor Death 14:20 – Enemies Forced Together in Peace 15:50 – Astral Plane ✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Enter My $1,000 Magic System Contest! Jed Herne 2023-07-05 | Enter the contest here: jedherne.com/magicRead Frequently Asked Questions in the pinned comment below.***I'm running a contest to find the best unpublished fantasy magic system! The winner will receive $1000 plus one hour of coaching with myself.
Cheap Dopamine Is Ruining Your Writing Jed Herne 2023-06-30 | Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Intro02:22 - Dopamine audit04:19 - Don't spike before writing10:00 - The 1 decision that eliminates 100016:28 - The struggle never ends✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Fantasy Warfare: How to Write Thrilling Battles Jed Herne 2023-06-20 | Master the art of fantasy writing and fast-track your journey to publication with my 1-on-1 Story Coaching program. Apply now at: jedherne.com/coachingIn this video, I share a formula that can be used to tell if your fantasy battle scenes are working - or failing. This formula will also guide you in creating better fight scenes that grip readers and advance your plot in the most enthralling way possible. ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Intro00:29 - The Excitement Equation01:41 - Concern03:12 - Making characters more interesting07:35 - Making readers care about the battle08:53 - Propulsive prose✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
Worldbuilding: How to Write Fantasy Creatures Jed Herne 2023-06-12 | Check out my worldbuilding website: fantasyworldbuilder.comIn this video, I share my approach for creating interesting fantasy animals and creatures for your fantasy worlds. I also cover how to describe these fantasy creatures in a compelling and immersive way that results in a stronger narrative.⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:00:00 - Introduction00:22 - Emotion02:39 - SCAMPER04:12 - The food chain05:35 - Develop characters10:25 - Worldbuilding tool11:17 - Compelling details12:53 - Use all 5 senses13:52 - Avoid measurements15:33 - Draw from your life✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK:Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS:Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com💌 MY NEWSLETTER:Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: bit.ly/jednewsletter📙 MY BOOKS:Across the Broken Stars: jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstarsThe Thunder Heist: jedherne.com/thethunderheistFires of the Dead: jedherne.com/firesofthedead🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS:Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount.MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301🧑 ABOUT ME:Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME:Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherneSend me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
