Jed HerneHere's some of my favourite fantasy plot devices and tropes. Let me know your top tropes in the comments! Enter my $1,000 Magic System contest: youtube.com/watch?v=F0vDbqMBWyE
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00:00 – Introduction 01:14 – Character Campfire Building 03:59 – Wistful Gaze for Adventure 05:43 – Corrupting Magic Item 08:51 – Magical Loopholes 11:53 – The Mentor Death 14:20 – Enemies Forced Together in Peace 15:50 – Astral Plane
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)
These 7 Fantasy Tropes Work Every TimeJed Herne2023-07-12 | Here's some of my favourite fantasy plot devices and tropes. Let me know your top tropes in the comments! Enter my $1,000 Magic System contest: youtube.com/watch?v=F0vDbqMBWyE
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 – Introduction 01:14 – Character Campfire Building 03:59 – Wistful Gaze for Adventure 05:43 – Corrupting Magic Item 08:51 – Magical Loopholes 11:53 – The Mentor Death 14:20 – Enemies Forced Together in Peace 15:50 – Astral Plane
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)The Secret to Writing Emotional Fantasy StoriesJed Herne2024-10-15 | Watch my full deep dive on writing emotion in your fantasy novel: youtube.com/watch?v=IAAm_EAJiQs9 Ending Mistakes New Fantasy Writers MakeJed Herne2024-10-12 | Want me to help you write a great ending? Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/bootcamp-cohort-4
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00:00 - Introduction 00:30 - Poor payoffs 03:24 - Not planning backwards 06:14 - Making the climax easy 08:40 - Winning through luck 10:56 - Not resolving the core conflict 16:40 - Fizzle-out endings 18:10 - Not aligning internal and external journeys 20:30 - Overly neat wrap-ups 22:28 - A weak closing image
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🎮 MY INTERACTIVE FANTASY NOVEL: Siege of Treboulain: choiceofgames.com/siege-of-treboulainDo This to Write Better Fantasy Side CharactersJed Herne2024-10-09 | Want me to help you write better fantasy characters? Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/jeds-fantasy-bootcampHow to Outline Your Fantasy Novel (The Hourglass Method)Jed Herne2024-10-06 | Join my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/jeds-outlining-program Inside the program, I'll help you build your outline so that you can write a captivating fantasy novel.
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00:00 - Introduction 00:40 - Why outline? 02:55 - The purpose of outlining 07:02 - The Hourglass Method 07:29 - Exploring the suburb 15:32 - Finding your story's core 16:29 - Premise 19:40 - Theme 23:11 - Putting it all together 26:06 - Character arcs 33:52 - Structuring your plot
🎮 MY VIDEO GAME: Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details10 Best Ways to Start Your Fantasy NovelJed Herne2024-09-15 | Get my First Chapter Mastery course: bit.ly/1st-chapter-course I asked 400 fantasy readers: "What's the best way to start a fantasy novel?" In this video, I react to the top 10 most common responses.
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00:00 - Introduction 00:39 - Introduce the magic system 03:16 - Start with the villain 09:12 - Foreshadowing 11:09 - Set the tone 13:16 - Prologues 16:32 - Dialogue 20:08 - Mystery 23:16 - Worldbuilding 25:29 - Introduce the main character 29:26 - In media res
00:00 - I surveyed 367 readers 00:30 - Too many characters 02:05 - Meaningless action 06:07 - Prologues 10:37 - Dream sequences 13:17 - Made-up words 16:44 - Characters waking up 18:54 - Confusing setups 21:55 - Irrelevant characters/scenes 24:12 - Slow pacing 27:28 - Info-dumping7 Signs Readers Will Love Your Magic SystemJed Herne2024-08-09 | Get my free 'Magic Limitations, Weaknesses, & Consequences' inspiration resource here: jedherne.com/magiclimits
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00:00 - Introduction 00:30 - Does it have this effect? 01:45 - Creative solutions 02:52 - Interesting limitations, weaknesses, and consequences 05:47 - Tree Trunk Technique 08:07 - The Pokemon Effect 10:55 - Unity with your Triangle of Story 15:02 - Originality
00:21 - FIRES OF THE DEAD 00:33 - Build unique magic with limitations 04:28 - Tailor your magic to create conflict 07:19 - Create unique worlds through combination
09:10 - ACROSS THE BROKEN STARS 10:20 - Build depth with synthesis 13:51 - Adjust your world to improve your plot 15:59 - Leave some things mysterious
17:37 - THE THUNDER HEIST 18:26 - Originality comes from a fusion of curiosities 22:10 - Consider the emotion 23:57 - Use non-visual senses
26:43 - SIEGE OF TREBOULAIN 27:14 - Extend the world past your story 29:34 - Give us some rays of sunshine 31:36 - Liquid, not solid
32:44 - KINGDOM OF DRAGONS 34:01 - Use conflicting versions of history 35:43 - Use the plot to explore the world 36:41 - Enrich the background
✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL: Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount. ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link. Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene6 First Page Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer MakesJed Herne2024-06-25 | After reviewing hundreds of opening pages, here's the most common mistakes I've found. Join my First Chapter Mastery program: firstchaptermastery.com (This includes a recording of my First Chapter Critique workshop)
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00:00 - Introduction 00:23 - Clickbait first sentences 04:29 - Low Rate of Revelation 10:31 - No taste of USP 15:53 - Not understanding the 6 Opening Options 26:25 - Overwhelming readers 28:15 - Thinking this has to be perfect
✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL: Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
Video edited by @the_fools_taleJoe Abercrombie Shows Me How to Write PERFECT Character IntroductionsJed Herne2024-06-09 | I sit down with Joe Abercrombie to look at his opening chapters from 'A Little Hatred.' Join my First Chapter Mastery program: firstchaptermastery.com (This includes a recording of my First Chapter Critique workshop)
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00:00 - Introduction 00:40 - Joe's philosophy on 1st chapters 01:34 - Picking the right character to start with 04:07 - How to write a great opening sentence 09:40 - Does your setting matter? 13:17 - Foreshadowing 17:17 - Write in layers 18:50 - Developing unique character voices 21:39 - Joe's planning method 27:41 - Moving to Savine's chapter 30:08 - Dialogue vs description 35:18 - Use worldbuilding to build character 36:51 - How to build complex characters 41:37 - Use side characters 47:26 - Impactful introductions 50:53 - Joe's biggest tips for writers
00:00 - Introduction 00:56 - Pointless questions 03:09 - Not using conflict to reveal character 05:08 - Not targeting your character's weaknesses 07:38 - Repetitive conflict 12:11 - Not modulating your conflicts
✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL: Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount. ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link. Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/sceneHow to Write Fantasy Character Arcs Better than 99% of WritersJed Herne2024-05-24 | This is a full guide to writing amazing character arcs in your fantasy novel. Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline (Applications for Cohort 4 close on Oct 14th)
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount. ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link. Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/sceneThis 1-Minute Habit Helped Me Write 1 Million WordsJed Herne2024-05-06 | You can use the principles in the video to make your own writing tracker, or you can get the one I've spent 6+ years refining here: jedherne.com/tracker
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00:00 - Introduction 00:37 - The psychology of motivation 02:17 - Gamify your writing 03:42 - The Seinfeld Rule 05:14 - The One-Up Principle 07:16 - The Belief Booster
✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL: Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount. ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link. Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene6 Magic System Mistakes New Fantasy Writers MakeJed Herne2024-04-26 | Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
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00:00 - Introduction 00:19 - Everything's a nail 01:39 - No consideration of limits 06:05 - Thinking you need a hard magic system 10:55 - Not integrating with the triangle of story 16:28 - The sloppy buffet 18:42 - Instant mastery
✏️ WORK WITH ME TO PLAN YOUR NOVEL: Apply for my 7-week Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use my affiliate link for a 5% discount. ProWritingAid (great editing software): jedherne.com/prowritingaid - 10% discount with my affiliate link. Scene Structure Template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/scene10 Things Fantasy Readers Love (Writing Advice)Jed Herne2024-03-21 | I asked 348 fantasy readers the #1 thing they LOVE to read. Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:23 - Meaningful consequences & sacrifices 02:45 - Authentic Relationships and Romance 05:35 - Exploration of Themes 08:45 - Morally Grey Characters 11:38 - Diverse and Creative Creatures 14:02 - The Found Family Trope 15:39 - Plots Twists 16:56 - Immersive World-Building 19:49 - Innovative Magic Systems 20:50 - Relatable, Complex Characters Who Grow
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Video edited by @the_fools_tale10 Things Fantasy Readers Hate (Writing Advice)Jed Herne2024-03-13 | I asked 348 fantasy readers about their least favourite story elements. Watch this next: youtu.be/_E-IAa3g604?si=QmYSRi9DKR_NYYFU Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
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00:00 – Intro 00:32 – Modern language & anachronistic terms 02:14 – Slow pacing and filler content 05:02 – Forced humour 07:56 – Shallow magic systems 11:42 – Miscommunication as conflict 13:24 – Info-dumps 15:41 – Poor character development 18:47 – Gratuitous sex and violence 21:01 – Poorly executed tropes 25:04 – Forced romance
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Video edited by @the_fools_taleJust Get Bored, and Youll Write Better Fantasy BooksJed Herne2024-03-06 | In a world of endless stimulation, here's how boredom will elevate your writing. Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Intro 01:09 - Understand the two outcomes of boredom 04:05 - The Neil Gaiman gaze 05:53 - Become a watchful waiter 08:18 - Get off the cocaine pellet dispenser 11:44 - Occasionally select the low stimulation option 14:26 - Fill the boredom with notes & ideas
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.Your Fantasy Characters Need 4 IdentitiesJed Herne2024-02-28 | This simple technique will add tremendous depth, complexity, and realism to your fantasy characters.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:22 - The four selves 00:52 - Bilbo 01:51 - Snape 02:45 - Gavin Guile 03:38 - Logen Ninefingers
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.This 1 Sticky Note Will Save Your Fantasy NovelJed Herne2024-02-15 | Get my free 1-page guiding document example: jedherne.com/guide Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
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00:00 - The problem this solves 01:39 - What is this concept? 05:36 - How will this save your fantasy novel? 07:17 - How to craft this 13:22 - Using this to explore further questions
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller - distraction-free writing laptop: getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 (use my affiliate link for a 5% discount). ProWritingAid - great editing software: jedherne.com/prowritingaid (use my affiliate link for a 20% discount).
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.20 Sentence Mistakes New Fantasy Writers MakeJed Herne2024-02-03 | This is a full masterclass on writing better sentences in your fantasy novel. Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with my affiliate link): jedherne.com/prowritingaid
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed Herne. I'm a fantasy author with four published novels and a video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.7 Antagonist Mistakes New Fantasy Writers MakeJed Herne2024-01-23 | Avoid these mistakes to write better antagonists. Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/fantasy-bootcamp
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.How to Structure a Fantasy Scene (6 Steps)Jed Herne2024-01-14 | Here's a simple way to structure great scenes in your fantasy novel. Get my Notion Scene template: bit.ly/scene-template Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/jed-bootcamp
🎮 MY VIDEO GAME: Siege of Treboulain: jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-detailsMy Top 5 Books from 2023 (And What They Taught Me)Jed Herne2024-01-06 | Here's the best novels I read in 2023, along with one key writing lesson I learned from each of them. Follow me on instagram: instagram.com/jedherne
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:07 - Legends & Lattes by Travis Baldree 04:42 - Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson 07:17 - Breakfast at Tiffany's by Truman Capote 11:18 - Jade City by Fonda Lee 14:05 - The Disenchanted by Budd Schulberg
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Why You Cant Finish Your Fantasy NovelJed Herne2023-12-27 | Here's the four main reasons why you might be struggling. Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/outlining_bootcamp Get my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com Get my word count tracker template: jedherne.gumroad.com/l/tracker
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00:00 - Introduction 01:01 - The wrong motivation 08:40 - Poor planning 17:09 - Relying on discipline, not systems 20:59 - No enjoyment practice
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)7 Description Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer MakesJed Herne2023-12-20 | After editing 751,000+ words this year, here's the most common description mistakes I see new writers make. Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with this affiliate link): prowritingaid.com/en/App/Purchase?afid=4301&vc=MJS7LSNQGQ
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00:00 - Introduction 00:45 - Over-relying on sight 04:43 - Not filtering through the narrator 09:36 - Using your first ideas 10:30 - Disconnected descriptions 15:26 - Repetitive sentence lengths 17:08 - Starting sentences with the same words 18:23 - Overly abstract descriptions
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)How to Create Emotion in Your Fantasy NovelJed Herne2023-12-10 | Here's what I learned from The Emotional Craft of Fiction by Donald Maass. Get the book here: amzn.to/46WqI1U Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: bit.ly/outlining-bootcamp
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00:00 - Introduction 00:35 - Infuse infodumps with meaning 05:05 - Write around the emotion 10:51 - Small details create big emotion 15:46 - Building an emotional hook 20:53 - Ask your characters the right questions 24:56 - Create polarity shifts 28:03 - Moral elevation
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with four published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.A writing dream come trueJed Herne2023-11-28 | You guys did it - Kingdom of Dragons has funded on Kickstarter! Get your deluxe, signed copy here: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=5z8lea7 Non-Writing Habits That Make You a Better Fantasy WriterJed Herne2023-11-25 | Here's the most useful (non-writing) habits that help me write better fantasy novels. Read my new book, Kingdom of Dragons: bit.ly/kingdom-of-dragons-book Join my Easy Writing Habits course: bit.ly/easy-writing-habits-course Download my 'Movie Database' Notion Template: bit.ly/movie-database
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00:00 - Introduction 00:14 - Ask why people enjoyed a story 01:15 - Note 1 story lesson from every movie 02:59 - Say yes 05:03 - Chase physical excellence 07:42 - Follow your curiosities 09:58 - Real-world research 11:23 - Amor Fati
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Jed Herne Reads From Kingdom of DragonsJed Herne2023-11-23 | Today, I'm reading the opening three chapters from my new fantasy novel! Get a deluxe, signed edition of the book on Kickstarter for a limited time (ends Nov. 27th): kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=1wy2xu
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00:00 - About the book 00:53 - Chapter 1 (Zora) 07:28 - Chapter 2 (Rovan) 21:14 - Chapter 3 (Zora)This simple trick helps me write FASTERJed Herne2023-11-21 | ...10 Main Character Mistakes New Fantasy Writers MakeJed Herne2023-11-18 | Avoid these mistakes and you'll boost your chances of writing a great main character. Read Kingdom of Dragons: jedherne.com/kingdom
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:33 - Lacking emotional truth 03:18 - Weak challenges 06:33 - No attempt to see them from antagonist's perspective 07:45 - One-dimensional 11:30 - Not describing through their lens 15:04 - Seeing plot as separate from character 17:02 - Weak introduction 19:11 - Hype without action 21:01 - Weak goals 23:27 - Doesn't solve the climax
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)This fantasy book has been 20 years in the making...Jed Herne2023-11-02 | I'm so excited to share Kingdom of Dragons with you :) Get the book here: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=91ywsqMaking the Cover for My Next Fantasy Book (Kingdom of Dragons)Jed Herne2023-10-28 | Here's a full behind-the-scenes look at my cover design process for Kingdom of Dragons! Get the book on Kickstarter (launches November 2nd): kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=f3ytov
A massive thanks to Yasu Matsuoka for his incredible cover art! yasuartstudio.com
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00:00 - Introduction 00:27 - What’s the book about? 01:14 - Starting the cover design 02:36 - How to find a cover artist 04:50 - Making the design brief 05:48 - Sketching initial concepts 07:18 - Looking at the first designs 08:02 - Interior artwork 09:14 - Picking the concept & sending the contract 09:53 - Developing the concept 10:24 - Coloured draft 10:50 - Refining the design 11:52 - The big reveal
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)I Helped a Writer Fix His First ChapterJed Herne2023-10-25 | Today, I'm helping a new writer edit the first chapter of his fantasy novel. Want me to coach you? Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: http://jedherne.com/outline
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00:00 - Introduction 01:05 - Ethan's goals for the call 01:49 - Correct manuscript formatting 02:57 - The opening sentence 03:23 - Character backstory 03:41 - Ground us within the setting 04:56 - How can substances impact the magic 05:37 - Scene transitions 06:36 - Dialogue formatting 07:41 - Paragraph spacing 11:40 - Action beats with dialogue 12:33 - Speaking names in dialogue 13:24 - Understanding punctuation 16:04 - Fix foreshadowing later in the edit 16:48 - How to describe coughing 19:24 - The importance of intention 20:06 - The Emotion Thesaurus 23:02 - Back to expressing coughing in dialogue 24:21 - Lean into the apprentice trope 25:59 - Formatting interjections 26:32 - An industrialising fantasy world 29:55 - Writing accents 31:29 - Creating a culture inspired by leafcutter ants 32:52 - An easy worldbuilding win 34:09 - Be cautious about this 34:47 - Learning from The Name of the Wind 36:03 - Writing songs 36:38 - Where the chapter becomes interesting 38:22 - Shortening the chapter 40:11 - Conveying the magic system 43:13 - Dealing with a tone change 47:12 - Picking the right character for exposition 48:16 - Establishing promises 48:41 - Series or standalone?
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Good vs Bad FANTASY Prologues (Writing Advice)Jed Herne2023-10-18 | I used to hate prologues, but I've changed my mind. This video explains why... Check out my next book (Kingdom of Dragons) on Kickstarter: bit.ly/kingdom-of-dragons-jed
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 01:00 - A Game of Thrones 04:29 - Never Die 05:17 - Dragon Mage 09:39 - The Fellowship of the Ring 12:35 - Mistborn
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)6 Ways to Write Sadder Character DeathsJed Herne2023-10-06 | If you're going to kill a character, you might as well make readers cry ... Check out my next novel, Kingdom of Dragons: kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons?ref=ac2qkf
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:26 - Deep Relationships 01:24 - The Redemptive Arc 02:25 - Remove the Protector 02:50 - Subvert Expectations 04:00 - Promise a Great Future, Then Take It Away 04:35 - Fulfill the Character's Arc Perfectly 06:26 - Bonus Strategy
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)116 Writers Sent Me Their Magic System Ideas (Best Wins $1,000)Jed Herne2023-09-30 | I ran a contest to find the best fantasy magic ideas, and here's what happened... Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: http://jedherne.com/outline
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction 00:09 - Round 1 10:58 - Round 2 14:10 - Round 3 29:30 - The Last Round
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)9 Plot Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer MakesJed Herne2023-09-14 | I've edited a lot of fantasy novels this year - here's the most common plot mistakes I find. Work with me to outline your fantasy novel: http://jedherne.com/outline
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction 00:35 - Beating the antagonist too early 02:13 - Repetitive scene formats 04:01 - Passive protagonist 05:20 - Weak throughline 08:15 - Soggy middle 13:56 - Weak consequences 15:00 - Misaligning the 3 Ps 15:52 - The peter-out ending 17:36 - Lucky breaks for the protagonist
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)I Quit My Job to Be a Full-Time AuthorJed Herne2023-09-06 | I finally did it ... Join my habits course: http://easywritinghabits.com Apply for my 6-week fantasy outlining bootcamp: jedherne.com/outline
I this video I share my journey to becoming a full-time fantasy author and YouTuber. It's been a wild ride here, and I can't wait to see the next chapter unfold.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction 00:39 - How this happened 15:20 - My last day at work 16:33 - What has it been like to be full-time? 19:03 - 6 principles that made this possible 25:49 - What's next?
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)I Talked To Kickstarters Head of Book PublishingJed Herne2023-08-28 | Today, I'm interviewing Oriana Leckert - Kickstarter's Head of Publishing. She's worked behind the scenes on some massive campaigns - including Brandon Sanderson's $40m game-changing 'Secret Project.' But it's not just big authors who are winning on Kickstarter, and in our conversation today, she shares principles that any author can use to find success on the platform.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:05 - Working with Brandon Sanderson 02:24 - How Sanderson changed Kickstarter 04:29 - The power of scarcity 05:08 - Are publishers threatened by Kickstarter? 08:08 - How Kickstarter helps niche authors 10:30 - The biggest mistake new authors make 12:04 - Picking your funding target 14:41 - How to market a Kickstarter 15:51 - How many book Kickstarters succeed? 18:10 - Oriana's #1 tip for success
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Strong Female Characters Will Ruin Your Novel (Writing Advice)Jed Herne2023-08-20 | Here's how you write a great female character that captivates readers. Get my free '100 Character Flaws' guide: jedherne.com/flaws
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:30 - The problem with strong female characters 02:30 - Three levels 04:16 - The importance of flaws 05:40 - Compelling character arcs 07:00 - A worthy antagonist 07:34 - Multi-dimensional 08:37 - Strength beyond muscles
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)18 Ways to Write Unique Magic SystemsJed Herne2023-08-09 | Here's 18 techniques for creating unique magic systems that make your fantasy novel stand out from the crowd. Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction 00:19 - Relate to social status 00:41 - Food based 01:43 - Place specific 02:12 - Core emotion 02:47 - Group reliant 03:08 - Seasonal 03:45 - Limits 04:32 - Modern tech 05:55 - Memory manipulation 06:53 - Art based 07:18 - Limited use 07:54 - Backwards from consequence 08:36 - Ancestral 09:26 - Sacrifice 10:02 - Inter personal transfer 10:27 - Natural phenomenon 11:00 - Astronomical alignments 11:27 - Niche interest
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Worldbuilding: How to Write Fantasy Setting DescriptionsJed Herne2023-08-02 | Read my free book, '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing.' jedherne.com/lessons Follow me on Instagram: instagram.com/jedherne
In today's video, I share my 7-step process for writing immersive setting descriptions in a fantasy novel.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction 00:20 - Define your purpose 01:42 - Filter through character 02:58 - Focus on the vivid & unique 05:00 - All 5 senses 06:39 - Progress plot & character 07:31 - Weave delivery systems 08:35 - Make the mundane specific 09:56 - Example setting description
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Good vs Bad FANTASY Dialogue (Writing Advice)Jed Herne2023-07-21 | If you're a fantasy writer looking to level up your writing, apply for my 1-on-1 Story Coaching program here: jedherne.com/coaching
In this video, I analyse good and bad dialogue scenes from The Rings of Power, The Lord of the Rings, Eragon, and Narnia - all to help you write better dialogue in your fantasy novel.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction 00:23 - What defines BAD fantasy dialogue? 02:17 - What defines GOOD fantasy dialogue? 04:59 - Special guests 05:42 - The Rings of Power 07:35 - The Chronicles of Narnia 09:58 - Eragon 12:54 - The Lord of the Rings
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Enter My $1,000 Magic System Contest!Jed Herne2023-07-05 | Enter the contest here: jedherne.com/magic Read Frequently Asked Questions in the pinned comment below.
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I'm running a contest to find the best unpublished fantasy magic system! The winner will receive $1000 plus one hour of coaching with myself.Cheap Dopamine Is Ruining Your WritingJed Herne2023-06-30 | Join my Easy Writing Habits course: easywritinghabits.com
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Intro 02:22 - Dopamine audit 04:19 - Don't spike before writing 10:00 - The 1 decision that eliminates 1000 16:28 - The struggle never ends
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
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🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Fantasy Warfare: How to Write Thrilling BattlesJed Herne2023-06-20 | Master the art of fantasy writing and fast-track your journey to publication with my 1-on-1 Story Coaching program. Apply now at: jedherne.com/coaching
In this video, I share a formula that can be used to tell if your fantasy battle scenes are working - or failing. This formula will also guide you in creating better fight scenes that grip readers and advance your plot in the most enthralling way possible.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Intro 00:29 - The Excitement Equation 01:41 - Concern 03:12 - Making characters more interesting 07:35 - Making readers care about the battle 08:53 - Propulsive prose
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)Worldbuilding: How to Write Fantasy CreaturesJed Herne2023-06-12 | Check out my worldbuilding website: fantasyworldbuilder.com
In this video, I share my approach for creating interesting fantasy animals and creatures for your fantasy worlds. I also cover how to describe these fantasy creatures in a compelling and immersive way that results in a stronger narrative.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:22 - Emotion 02:39 - SCAMPER 04:12 - The food chain 05:35 - Develop characters 10:25 - Worldbuilding tool 11:17 - Compelling details 12:53 - Use all 5 senses 13:52 - Avoid measurements 15:33 - Draw from your life
✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': jedherne.com/lessons
🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yimghg9 ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301
🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.
(Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)