Uploaded July 2026 | Updated September 2026, 2 weeks ago
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Your story has conflict. Your antagonist shows up. Things happen. So why does it still feel flat?
Most writers assume the problem is plot — not enough twists, too slow, or too predictable. But the real issue is almost always the antagonist, and specifically, the one job they were never given.
In this video, I walk you through what that job actually is, why it matters more than any plot event, and how to test whether your antagonist is doing it — or just draining the life from your story.
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0:00 Picture the movie Jaws...
0:30 What's missing in writers' stories?
3:30 Mistakes writers make with antagonists
4:40 Mistake #2 writers make with antagonists
6:22 Mistake #3 writers make with antagonists
9:00 How to find the "heat point" of your story
10:12 How to check on your antagonist
14:45 Mission of the week
Free Antagonist Pressure Worksheet for writers here:
rebrand.ly/bmgjvd9
Your story has conflict. Your antagonist shows up. Things happen. So why does it still feel flat?
Most writers assume the problem is plot — not enough twists, too slow, or too predictable. But the real issue is almost always the antagonist, and specifically, the one job they were never given.
In this video, I walk you through what that job actually is, why it matters more than any plot event, and how to test whether your antagonist is doing it — or just draining the life from your story.
PERSONAL HELP ON YOUR STORY STRUCTURE:
payhip.com/b/9Xh2j
✍️ GO DEEPER — WRITER'S BRAIN STUDIO: Want to work through the craft and the mindset with other serious writers? Come join us inside Writer's Brain Studio.
writersbrainstudio.com/join
▶️ Subscribe for weekly videos on writing craft, story structure, and the psychology of finishing what you start.
#writingtips #novelwriting #fictionwriting #writingcommunity #storystructure #writersbrainstudio #antagonist #writingadvice
0:00 Picture the movie Jaws...
0:30 What's missing in writers' stories?
3:30 Mistakes writers make with antagonists
4:40 Mistake #2 writers make with antagonists
6:22 Mistake #3 writers make with antagonists
9:00 How to find the "heat point" of your story
10:12 How to check on your antagonist
14:45 Mission of the week
