Uploaded April 2021 | Updated September 2026, 1 week ago

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In this video, I discuss things to consider while writing a scene, including the word choice in the details! I provide you with an example, which I walk you through, with the help of my whiteboard once again. I hope you enjoy this video, part 2of 3 in my word choice series.
I go over specific things one should consider when constructing or editing a draft of your scene in your book. These things are as follows:
Trim the fat
eliminate redundancy
using stronger verbs
concrete and specific descriptions
get rid of filter words

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