Uploaded October 2022 | Updated September 2026, 3 minutes ago
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
2:20 - Originality
3:42 - Conflict & tension
5:28 - Story engine
7:02 - Story vs situation
8:22 - Logic
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live
☾Wishbone - video reading: vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop
☾How You'll Feel After the War - PRISM international: prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: "l u v t e a [acoustic]" by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Twitter: twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: instagram.com/shaelinbishop
Goodreads: goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
2:20 - Originality
3:42 - Conflict & tension
5:28 - Story engine
7:02 - Story vs situation
8:22 - Logic
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live
☾Wishbone - video reading: vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop
☾How You'll Feel After the War - PRISM international: prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: "l u v t e a [acoustic]" by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Twitter: twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: instagram.com/shaelinbishop
Goodreads: goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop
![9 Things to Do Before Starting a Novel | setting yourself up for success!
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
0:34 - Create optimal thinking space
1:29 - Study similar work
2:55 - Set up an intuitive digital workflow
4:55 - Test run the voice
6:29 - Consider the form
7:46 - Optimize tension between characters
9:55 - Understand character goals
10:45 - Set up for the inciting incident
12:02 - Discuss early chapters
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop 9 Things to Do Before Starting a Novel | setting yourself up for success!](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/fMqCQaISVec/mqdefault.jpg)
![WRITING CRAFT Q&A🗯️best/worst advice, complex character psychology, subplots, etc!
RELATED VIDEOS
→Specificity: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgNW3EgtT1E
→Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrXfZqYcDxg&t=1s
→Revision Tips: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3w-0pu_qOw0
TIMESTAMPS
0:00 - intro
0:20 - best and worst writing advice
1:45 - integrating subplots
3:35 - writing slowly
4:51 - complex character psychology
8:00 - how would you approach teaching?
11:31 - encouraging a teen writer
13:31 - where do you buy shirts?
14:34 - restarting a book from scratch
16:35 - threading in themes
18:10 - how do I get over the fear of editing?
20:58 - deciding which stories to submit to contests
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾I Am a Wolf in Wolfs Clothing - filling Station: https://fillingstation.myshopify.com/products/filling-station-issue-81
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 26
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop WRITING CRAFT Q&A🗯️best/worst advice, complex character psychology, subplots, etc!](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/fVaS4lQypmI/mqdefault.jpg)
![Wait...this book is good now? (How I Fixed It) | NaNoWriMo 2022
the rest of this saga:
pt 1 - my current writing struggles: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nocNtzBgGU
pt 2 - so my book is kind of bad...: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoAKYJDGx7U&t=189s
pt 3 - writing my disaster novel (nano vlog #1): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ygG_zUj5B24
lets chat about:
0:00 - writing something good
2:18 - adding a turning point
3:34 - zooming in on internal narrative
5:01 - when to take a break vs keep writing
6:35 - how I fixed this book
9:30 - developing character relationships
16:16 - knowing craft doesnt make writing easy
18:22 - character development exercise
24:28 - figuring out where to go next
29:21 - my best day of writing so far
my spotify: https://open.spotify.com/user/shaelinmarly
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
#nanowrimo #nanowrimo2022
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Wait...this book is good now? (How I Fixed It) | NaNoWriMo 2022](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/fj3M_x00Xno/mqdefault.jpg)
![THE MOST COMMON SHORT STORY MISTAKES + how to stand out! (from a litmag slush reader)
RELATED VIDEOS:
→How to Write a Short Story: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8DellQae18&list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK4K0toVsmunWYSUzr0gH9F&index=2&t=13s&pp=gAQBiAQB
→Short Story Tips (part 1): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOj7Ko_3vwg&list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK4K0toVsmunWYSUzr0gH9F&index=1&t=137s&pp=gAQBiAQB
→Short Story Tips (part 2): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fxb8TZbTlZc&list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK4K0toVsmunWYSUzr0gH9F&index=4&pp=gAQBiAQB
→Short Story Tips (part 3): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PsSRgC4By0Q&list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK4K0toVsmunWYSUzr0gH9F&index=16&pp=gAQBiAQB
→Submitting & Publishing Short Stories: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VYCepQ-7ChQ&list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK4K0toVsmunWYSUzr0gH9F&index=4
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - intro
1:28 - its not a story
2:13 - narrative is too distant
3:14 - the end is actually the beginning
3:59 - no sense of the protagonist
5:15 - no sense of setting or storyline
6:18 - familiar narrative elements
7:37 - the so what? story
9:00 - clarity issues and unclear plot
9:54 - tone undermines the story
11:08 - general blandness
12:12 - 5 ways to stand out in the slush pile
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 26
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop THE MOST COMMON SHORT STORY MISTAKES + how to stand out! (from a litmag slush reader)](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/fmZUgCucu_E/mqdefault.jpg)
![6-ARC STORY STRUCTURE (character driven + pantser friendly) | with template 📝
wake up babe new plot structure just dropped
Template + Learn More: https://bit.ly/3Y4gnNB
RELATED VIDEOS:
→How to Structure Your Book (with no outline or plot structure): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zlqBSD_4OB8&t=922s
→Writing Compelling Character Relationships: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0tRuKHWkb-A
→The Easiest Pacing Hack: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMGUEwbumw8&t=58s
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:35 - What is 6-arc story structure?
5:07 - Arc 1: Introduction
7:11 - Arc 2: Establishment
8:20 - Arc 3: Complication
10:03 - Arc 4: Transformation
11:40 - Arc 5: Actualization
12:24 - Arc 6: Revelation
15:03 - Word count suggestions
16:42 - Is this structure right for your book?
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop 6-ARC STORY STRUCTURE (character driven + pantser friendly) | with template 📝](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/foxHoS1BrzY/mqdefault.jpg)
![Recent Reads #46 | My favourite book of 2022
BOOKS MENTIONED:
0:00 - Intro
1:08 - All This Could be Different by Sarah Thankam Mathews (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/59576064)
3:43 - The World Cannot Give by Tara Isabella Burton (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/58070067)
5:30 - Killing It by Gaia Rajan (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/61296601-killing-it)
6:36 - Avalon by Nell Zink (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/59089926)
7:42 - The House of Rust by Khadijah Abdalla Bajaber (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/56269267)
8:54 - The Tensorate Series by Neon Yang (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/56900737-the-tensorate-series?from_search=true&from_srp=true&qid=OeC1MKQFBx&rank=2)
10:21 - Once There Were Wolves by Charlotte McConaghy (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/54860573-once-there-were-wolves)
12:40 - Bad Cree by Jessica Johns (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60839741)
14:06 - No Man’s Land by John Vigna (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/57454930)
16:05 - Bad Fruit by Ella King (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60258642)
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 26
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Recent Reads #46 | My favourite book of 2022](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/gMAdWy5j_xs/mqdefault.jpg)
![Recent Reads #33
Correction: I said in the video that Bone House was from Sad Spell Press, but its actually from Bull City Press! Ive left the link below!
THE BOOKS
0:00 - Intro
0:29 - Bone House by K-Ming Chang (https://bullcitypress.com/product/bone-house-by-k-ming-chang-inch-47/)
2:07 - Portrait of My Body as a Crime Im Still Committing by Topaz Winters (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/46213487-portrait-of-my-body-as-a-crime-i-m-still-committing)
3:04 - We Can Only Save Ourselves by Alison Wisdom (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/52034322-we-can-only-save-ourselves)
5:50 - Piranesi by Susanna Clarke (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/50202953-piranesi)
8:20 - The Fifth Season by N.K Jemisin (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/19161852-the-fifth-season)
12:03 - Brute by Emily Skaja (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/40121965)
13:30 - Filthy Animals by Brandon Taylor (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/55801198)
15:15 - The Certainties by Aislinn Hunter (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/49494998-the-certainties)
17:04 - Something New Under the Sun by Alexandra Kleeman (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/55905024-something-new-under-the-sun)
20:08 - Paradise Rot by Jenny Hval (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/39216527-paradise-rot)
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT FICTION:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Recent Reads #33](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/gPe4oT2LgyE/mqdefault.jpg)
![15 Questions to Ask When Revising Your Book
RELATED VIDEOS:
-14 Revision Tips! | How to Edit Your Novel: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3w-0pu_qOw0
-My Revision Process | Every Draft of My Book: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AMmlADcLT1U
-The Three Planes of a Story | Creating Causal Connections: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VSDKJli0GEI&t=469s
-Flashback Hack: Connection Backstory to Present: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0TWiYvITGjg
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:36 - Is anything in the story unconvincing?
2:40 - Are there any ideas the story wants to press on but isnt yet?
3:20 - Is there any untapped potential?
4:00 - Is there anything that could be more interesting?
4:32 - Is anything set up that doesnt pay off? Pay offs that arent set up?
5:00 - Does the story reflect the themes as intended?
5:57 - Are there any repeated beats?
6:11 - Are there any unrelated threads that could be tied together?
6:42 - Are there any points the plot development could be simplified?
7:36 - Are the consequences fully played out?
8:20 - Is there a clear causal chain?
9:03 - Are there long stretches without emotional shifts?
9:38 - Is there any key but missing information?
10:00 - Is there any point the story feels manipulated?
10:42 - Is there anything you dont like
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop 15 Questions to Ask When Revising Your Book](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/h5MIDvPGhcY/mqdefault.jpg)
![Edit a Short Story with Me! | Writing Vlog
And chaos shall reign. Lets play a game of spot the typo :)
RELATED VIDEOS:
→How to Write a Short Story: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8DellQae18&t=11s
→12 Tips for New Short Story Writers: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOj7Ko_3vwg
→15 Tips for Writing Better Short Stories: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fxb8TZbTlZc&t=682s
→Everything About Submitting Short Stories: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VYCepQ-7ChQ&t=113s
→How to Wrote my Short Story Collection: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sogfSzBc6cE
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT FICTION:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - CBC [excerpt]: https://www.cbc.ca/books/literaryprizes/zugzwang-by-shaelin-bishop-1.5977031
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Vlog
17:52 - My short fiction editing process
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Edit a Short Story with Me! | Writing Vlog](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/hLEUFEIHc7k/mqdefault.jpg)
![HOW TO WRITE NARRATIVE SUMMARY (that’s actually interesting) | theory, tips, & examples
Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e0NqMCOPJTI9OrssfK_9KnKXF_58GUwr/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=116668235133004419151&rtpof=true&sd=true
RELATED VIDEOS
→Why Telling is Actually Good: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8OQ3unyD0Eg
→How to Write a Scene: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QV_LNsEiJns
→Psychic Distance: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HUwgJY_1LjU&t=29s
→The Ultimate Guide to POV: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P87GYxwoQUE
→Specificity: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgNW3EgtT1E
0:00 - intro
0:26 - scene vs summary
1:52 - when to use summary
3:50 - psychic distance/how to write thoughts
7:33 - use voice tone and emotion
8:06 - keep the psychic distance close
9:22 - be specific
10:09 - be generous with information
10:49 - access emotions and opinions
11:43 - conflict, goals, tension
12:24 - understand the relationship to time
13:38 - use showing and telling
14:37 - use dialogue
15:07 - unpack ideas set up in scene
16:00 - use sentence structure as pacing
16:30 - example #1
20:37 - example #2
22:11 - example #3
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
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MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
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→How old are you? - 26
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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![Editing the book I wrote in 2017 (its a mess) | NaNoTryMo 2021 Vlog
At one point the thought edit the entire short story collection you wrote in 2017 in two weeks came into my mind, and I suppose I thought it was a good idea.
NaNoWriMo 2021 Vlog #1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM8uekKZqBM
Lets chat about:
0:00 - Current NaNoWriMo plans
4:13 - Getting my issue of a litmag
4:35 - Struggling with edits for a magazine
6:57 - Deciding to revise other stories
7:37 - Kudzu Girls
10:58 - Barefoot/Beautiful Animal
15:24 - Hold Me Under Till I See the Light
16:05 - Overall NaNoWriMo thoughts
18:21 - I Will Never Tell You This
19:07 - Editing 7 stories in one day
26:03 - Final thoughts and ongoing plans
ALL MY PUBLISHED WORK: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 24
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
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