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I love writing novels except ❤️ when I don't ❤️ haha!!
THE REST OF THIS BOOK'S JOURNEY:
A (false) Start: youtube.com/watch?v=pE4FmtjQnLE&t=204s
Restarting! | NaNoWriMo part 1: youtube.com/watch?v=c2hFsInNdUQ
Losing NaNoWriMo and Thriving: youtube.com/watch?v=TKMYNirm2n0
@rachelwritesbooks - Making a (fan) Dust Jacket in Photoshop: youtube.com/watch?v=fZUBcrXzz_U
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT FICTION:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live
☾Wishbone - video reading: vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - CBC [excerpt]: cbc.ca/books/literaryprizes/zugzwang-by-shaelin-bishop-1.5977031
LET'S CHAT ABOUT...
0:00 - Starting this draft again
1:25 - Rereading the book & being thankful
7:04 - Balancing writing tasks
12:15 - Very exciting writing things!!
13:13 - Editing a short story
15:04 - Tough chapters
18:32 - Struggling to draft & feeling disappointed
25:48 - Getting back on track
27:35 - Refinding the joy of writing
MORE WRITING TIPS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: "l u v t e a [acoustic]" by Autumn Keys
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Tumblr: shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: instagram.com/shaelinbishop
Goodreads: goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop
I love writing novels except ❤️ when I don't ❤️ haha!!
THE REST OF THIS BOOK'S JOURNEY:
A (false) Start: youtube.com/watch?v=pE4FmtjQnLE&t=204s
Restarting! | NaNoWriMo part 1: youtube.com/watch?v=c2hFsInNdUQ
Losing NaNoWriMo and Thriving: youtube.com/watch?v=TKMYNirm2n0
@rachelwritesbooks - Making a (fan) Dust Jacket in Photoshop: youtube.com/watch?v=fZUBcrXzz_U
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT FICTION:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live
☾Wishbone - video reading: vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - CBC [excerpt]: cbc.ca/books/literaryprizes/zugzwang-by-shaelin-bishop-1.5977031
LET'S CHAT ABOUT...
0:00 - Starting this draft again
1:25 - Rereading the book & being thankful
7:04 - Balancing writing tasks
12:15 - Very exciting writing things!!
13:13 - Editing a short story
15:04 - Tough chapters
18:32 - Struggling to draft & feeling disappointed
25:48 - Getting back on track
27:35 - Refinding the joy of writing
MORE WRITING TIPS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: "l u v t e a [acoustic]" by Autumn Keys
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Tumblr: shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: instagram.com/shaelinbishop
Goodreads: goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop
![magical realism & sad girl vignettes | recent reads
THE BOOKS
0:00 - Intro
1:02 - Ordinary Love by Marie Rutkoski
3:28 - Chouette by Claire Oshetsky
6:50 - Sister Snake by Amanda Lee Koe
9:59 - A Language of Limbs by Dylin Hardcastle
14:50 - One Hundred Years of Solitude by Gabriel Garcia Marquez
18:55 - Down the Rabbit Hole by Juan Pablo Villalobos
21:05 - Pedro Paramo by Juan Rulfo
23:21 - Agatha of Little Neon by Claire Luchette
24:55 - I Do Know Some Things by Richard Siken
28:11 - All Men Want to Know by Nina Bouraoui
30:33 - All Girls by Mine Alone by Sophie Strohmeier
→READ MY SHORT FICTION: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
INTRO
Hi, Im Shaelin! Im a fiction writer and currently an MFA candidate in writing. Im also a teaching fellow and have designed a university level writing course which I am currently prepping to teach next year. Ive been writing since childhood and completed over a dozen manuscripts, and am currently pursuing traditional publishing. Ive also published over fifteen short stories, many of which you can read online. On this channel, I chronicle my writing journey, as well as chat about writing craft and technique! Everything I just chat about is just my personal writing philosophy, but I hope sharing it might inspire you!
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
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Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop magical realism & sad girl vignettes | recent reads](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/UNO31ZcuOJk/mqdefault.jpg)
![The Three Planes of a Story | Creating Causal Connections
RELATED VIDEOS:
→Flashback Hack | Connecting Backstory to Present: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0TWiYvITGjg
→Reality in Fiction: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IMj2c79pljE
→How to Use Symbolism: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MAzLxxA2eEI
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:28 - The three planes of a story
4:41 - Types of plot connections
7:22 - Concrete connections
8:40 - Internal connections
9:50 - Metaphorical connections
11:11 - Fabulism vs fantasy
12:20 - How it all works together
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
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Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop The Three Planes of a Story | Creating Causal Connections](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/VSDKJli0GEI/mqdefault.jpg)
![Bad Habits I Got from My Writing Degree
RELATED VIDEOS:
→How My Writing Has Changed Since I Graduated: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pTzhhbbMehM
→Everything About Creative Writing Degrees (Q&A): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TTND1co_Nj4
→Advice for Creative Writing Students: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bt6Kvww3PCk&t=1s
→Everything I Wrote for My Writing Degree: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ptpKRqux9M&t=1040s
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
2:36 - Needing grades for validation
4:38 - Not knowing when a piece was done
5:45 - Not trusting my instincts
7:49 - Editing as a checklist
10:20 - Editing too much
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
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Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Bad Habits I Got from My Writing Degree](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/Vqr7Vm4WPE4/mqdefault.jpg)
![Writing in 2nd Person | The Forgotten POV
AUTHORTUBE WRITING CONFERENCE 2022:
→AWC Website: https://www.authortubewritingconference.com/
→AWC Publishing Track: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLVrC50nqY3OLgk4gaPsaJq5B0WZaHB_OZ
→AWC Writing Track: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLVrC50nqY3OImy-9cde9oof_ANtmSQpFa
→AWC Feedback Form: https://forms.gle/wm14ZBJqyAJ17JBG8
EXAMPLES:
→The Fifth Season by N.K Jemisin: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/19161852-the-fifth-season
→Mountain Under Sea by D.W. Wilson: https://www.cbc.ca/books/mountain-under-sea-by-d-w-wilson-1.4110919
→How to Get Filthy Rich in Rising Asia by Mohsin Hamid: https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/15815364
→How to Be an Other Woman by Lorrie Moore: http://static1.1.sqspcdn.com/static/f/1445195/19761776/1344404826457/moore.how-to-be-an-other-woman.pt1.pdf?token=8AUuGBtkTtqSSjksB4XGcNPQYmo%3D
→Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
RELATED VIDEOS:
→The Ultimate Guide to Tense and POV: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P87GYxwoQUE
→8 Unconventional POVs: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v G-G80OORLk
→Psychic Distance: How to Control POV: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HUwgJY_1LjU&t=474s
→The Unity of Form and Concept: Writing Experimental Fiction: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oFpiPH1nF0M&t=865s
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
2:40 - What is 2nd person POV?
7:00 - Misconceptions about 2nd Person
- Types of 2nd Person -
12:35 - 2nd person pure
13:55 - 2nd person interior
16:06 - 2nd person instructional
18:35 - 1st person referral
20:12 - Why use 2nd person
22:02 - Why not use 2nd person
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys Writing in 2nd Person | The Forgotten POV](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/W1b0EBHN3oE/mqdefault.jpg)
![2021 Writing Wrap-Up + 2022 Writing Goals (except I have none oops)
Another year has come and gone! This is what I did with the gift of 365 more days and more accurately, what I did not do.
ALL MY PUBLISHED WORK: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:35 - The writing stats
7:30 - 2021 publications
8:43 - 2021 goals
12:52 - Why I have no goals for 2022
15:27 - Publication plans & update
17:36 - Channel update
FAQS
→How old are you? - 24
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop 2021 Writing Wrap-Up + 2022 Writing Goals (except I have none oops)](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/W3ecio3P8LY/mqdefault.jpg)
![20 NaNoWriMo Tips! | productivity, self-care, getting unstuck, avoiding burnout
NaNoWriMo is upon us! Here are some tips for winning, or losing, or thriving, or just not-dying.
RELATED VIDEOS:
→I Wrote Every Day and This is What I Learned: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9VvxMoiMsV4
→5 NaNoWriMo Alternatives (making nano your own): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQzoH4ylO_4
→Why I Want to Lose NaNoWriMo: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zyEgX2xa4vU
→Should You Do NaNoWriMo?: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaxEIpcCXQs&t=545s
ALL MY PUBLISHED WORK: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:51 - Make it your own
3:21 - Try to write every day
4:43 - Write in multiple sessions
5:40 - Write before relaxing
6:56 - Minimize the effort it takes to start writing
7:51 - Clear your to-do list
8:34 - Set aside time to think
9:43 - Create a nice work environment
10:33 - Immerse in your book
12:01 - Brainstorm material
14:32 - Write through the problem quickly
15:48 - Dont forget the basics
16:28 - Dive into backstory
16:50 - Be intentional
18:04 - Pick a few marathon days
18:27 - Divide up your word count
19:04 - Let your goals change
20:29 - Change it up
21:01 - Keep a list of future edits
21:22 - Keep up the momentum if you still have it
FAQS
→How old are you? - 24
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop 20 NaNoWriMo Tips! | productivity, self-care, getting unstuck, avoiding burnout](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/WMHUzqY4qNI/mqdefault.jpg)
![Recent Reads #38 (while a kitten is climbing on me)
THE BOOKS
0:00 - Intro
1:40 - Summerwater by Sarah Moss (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/52185452-summerwater)
3:03 - Pebble Swing by Isabella Wang (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/59360758-pebble-swing)
3:53 - Second Place by Rachel Cusk (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/54785558-second-place)
5:15 - White on White by Aysegül Savas (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/54321728)
7:10 - When We Lost Our Heads by Heather ONeill (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/58446244)
9:01 - Jawbone by Monica Ojeda (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/44074748-jawbone)
11:04 - Cursed Bunny by Bora Chung (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/56648660-cursed-bunny)
12:38 - Infinite Country by Patricia Engel (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/54303848-infinite-country)
14:49 - Whereas by Layli Long Soldier (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/29875897-whereas)
16:10 - Northwood by Maryse Meijer (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/40196391-northwood)
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Recent Reads #38 (while a kitten is climbing on me)](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/Xb0WWun-lK0/mqdefault.jpg)
![Recent Reads #37 | Internet novels & plotless beauty
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
2:35 - What Strange Paradise by Omar El Akkad (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53773242-what-strange-paradise)
4:17 - She Who Became the Sun by Shelley Parker-Chan (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/48727813-she-who-became-the-sun_
6:12 - Summer by Ali Smith (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/52842705-summer)
8:07 - This is How You Lose the Time War by Amal El Mohtar and Max Gladstone (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/43352954-this-is-how-you-lose-the-time-war)
11:46 - The Idiot by Elif Batuman (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/30962053-the-idiot)
14:21 - No One is Talking About This by Patricia Lockwood (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53733106-no-one-is-talking-about-this)
17:45 - Ghost Forest by Pik-Shuen Fung (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/55333961)
20:09 - Rest and Be Thankful by Emma Glass (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/44587970)
21:17 - The Most Precious Substance on Earth by Shashi Bhat (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/57700204)
i read your little internet novels by Brandon Taylor: https://blgtylr.substack.com/p/i-read-your-little-internet-novels
→All My Published Work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 24
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Recent Reads #37 | Internet novels & plotless beauty](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/XuFvePADKUM/mqdefault.jpg)
![Recent Reads #30
THE BOOKS
0:00 - Intro
0:30 - Ayiti by Roxanne Gay (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/11535502-ayiti)
2:14 - Sweetbitter by Stephanie Danler (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/26192646-sweetbitter)
4:49 - A History of My Brief Body by Billy-Ray Belcourt (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/44049371-a-history-of-my-brief-body)
7:04 - Rabbit by Sophie Robinson (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/42292703-rabbit)
8:19 - All About Sarah by Pauline Delabroy-Allard (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/49569146-all-about-sarah)
11:15 - Red Island House by Andrea Lee (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/54304139-red-island-house)
15:02 - Writers and Lovers by Lily King (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/45289222-writers-lovers)
16:24 - The Lightness by Emily Temple (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/51822833-the-lightness)
18:57 - Small Beauty by jia qing wilson-yang (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/30326596)
20:16 - Saturn Peach by Lily Wang (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/55156131-saturn-peach)
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT FICTION:
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - CBC [excerpt]: https://www.cbc.ca/books/literaryprizes/zugzwang-by-shaelin-bishop-1.5977031
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco
Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ
OUTRO MUSIC: l u v t e a [acoustic] by Autumn Keys
SOCIAL
Tumblr: https://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com
Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask
Twitter: https://twitter.com/shaelinbishop
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/shaelinbishop/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/5803057-shaelin-bishop Recent Reads #30](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/YOSc_gW8pR8/mqdefault.jpg)
![16 Questions to Ask When Line Editing
RELATED VIDEOS
→The Art of Creating Verbs: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iTBwgW-i1zU
→Word Choice, Syntax, And Diction: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jKoOxrcVnHM
→Specificity and Concrete Language: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgNW3EgtT1E
→15 Questions to Ask When Revising Your Book: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h5MIDvPGhcY
→Revising Your Prose for Power and Punch by David Kaplan (pdf download): https://www.scribd.com/document/397419882/David-Michael-Kaplan-Revising-Your-Prose-For-Power-and-Punch-pdf
→All my published work: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
→If you want to support my channel, you can tip me on ko-fi! https://ko-fi.com/shaelinbishop
→BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co
→Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com
→Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co
MY SHORT STORIES:
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:07 - Are there any familiar phrases or cliches?
1:51 - Do we ever lose the characters body/senses?
2:39 - Can we see faces and bodies?
3:18 - Is there any unnecessary non-linearity?
4:00 - Are there any unnecessary details/actions?
4:40 - Is there any repeated description/detail?
5:04 - Could the verbs be stronger?
5:55 - Could the nouns be more specific?
6:28 - Are the voice and style consistent?
7:03 - Can the details be more specific/revealing?
7:49 - Are there any unnecessary similes?
8:21 - Are there any illogical constructions?
8:48 - Could the punctuation create between flow/tension?
9:33 - Do paragraphs have a clear sense of flow?
10:04 - Are there any sentences that need to be read twice?
10:42 - Is there anything you dont like?
FAQS
→How old are you? - 25
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
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![Recent Reads #48 | in my gay reading era
0:00 - Intro
0:47 - Brutes by Dizz Tate (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/61324696)
2:43 - After Sappho by Selby Wynn Schwartz (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/61089551)
4:17 - The World Keeps Ending and the World Goes On by Franny Choi (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60147181)
4:59 - Big Swiss by Jen Beagin (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60701439)
6:15 - Hijab Butch Blues by Lamya H (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/61111274)
8:04 - Bliss Montage by Ling Ma (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60243188)
8:48 - Couplets by Maggie Milner (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60784815)
11:33 - Scorched Grace by Margot Douaihy (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60610668)
13:18 - VenCo by Cherie Dimaline (https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/60877589)
15:35 - U Girl by Meredith Quartermaine (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/29633683-u-girl)
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MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: https://www.thetemzreview.com/fiction-shaelin-bishop.html
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: https://www.thecommononline.org/how-to-slaughter/
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/04/18/after-hours-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: https://vagabondcitylit.com/2022/03/21/daughter-of-a-king-by-shaelin-bishop/
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: https://plenitudemagazine.ca/zugzwang/
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: http://carouselmagazine.ca/c45-bishop/
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: https://ex-puritan.ca/never-tell-you-this
☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
☾How Youll Feel After the War - PRISM international: http://prismmagazine.ca/2021/10/20/prism-60-1-wonder/
FAQS
→How old are you? - 26
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.
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