Uploaded December 2022 | Updated September 2026, 2 weeks ago
this is my composition jury piece for this semester at apu. i've learned an insane amount about choral writing from this piece alone, and now i can't look at it without seeing things that 1.) wouldn't work in a choir, and 2.) logistically couldn't happen due to the proportions of a choir. there's just a lot that needs work on it, so i'm gonna rework it into JUST four-part (and maybe some splits), because it's just too big.
i have snagged the two main leitmotifs from this piece (patroclus' and achilles' themes, if you caught 'em) and begun to insert them into my hopefully-soon-to-be musical/senior project. i'm already invested in telling this story, so i might as well tell it in a way that makes me proud of myself.
overall, even if i'm not completely satisfied with this piece, it was essential in learning about my tendencies (both good and bad) as a composer. i thought i might as well post it here, even if i'll inevitably be embarrassed by it later. that's writing, baybee.
PS: apparently i REALLY like the dorian mode—because it's great. extra thanks to @luminalcycle for sight-reading the rehearsal-piano-that-will-likely-never-be-rehearsed and giving me solid feedback. i know i am insane for including three staves.
AND another shoutout to dr sutton for humbling me and my ten billion part splits. it DOES thin the sound, you're so right king.
blessings y'all
♬♩♪♩
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MY LINKS: solo.to/laureliamadeus
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♬♩♪♩
this is my composition jury piece for this semester at apu. i've learned an insane amount about choral writing from this piece alone, and now i can't look at it without seeing things that 1.) wouldn't work in a choir, and 2.) logistically couldn't happen due to the proportions of a choir. there's just a lot that needs work on it, so i'm gonna rework it into JUST four-part (and maybe some splits), because it's just too big.
i have snagged the two main leitmotifs from this piece (patroclus' and achilles' themes, if you caught 'em) and begun to insert them into my hopefully-soon-to-be musical/senior project. i'm already invested in telling this story, so i might as well tell it in a way that makes me proud of myself.
overall, even if i'm not completely satisfied with this piece, it was essential in learning about my tendencies (both good and bad) as a composer. i thought i might as well post it here, even if i'll inevitably be embarrassed by it later. that's writing, baybee.
PS: apparently i REALLY like the dorian mode—because it's great. extra thanks to @luminalcycle for sight-reading the rehearsal-piano-that-will-likely-never-be-rehearsed and giving me solid feedback. i know i am insane for including three staves.
AND another shoutout to dr sutton for humbling me and my ten billion part splits. it DOES thin the sound, you're so right king.
blessings y'all
♬♩♪♩
BUY MY MUSIC: laurenbiggsmusic.com
MY LINKS: solo.to/laureliamadeus
BUY ME A COFFEE:
ko-fi.com/laureliamadeus
♬♩♪♩








![Laureli Amadeus & R.J. Tolson - Take Me Home
whats up yall! heres a project ive been working on, hope you guys like it! im doing a lot of songs with R.J., so look forward to that :D
R.J.s Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/artist/1Amh6ZZheVmBeBnkrhwZMG?si=vhSzMdIYSEazOpwspXU2sQ
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SPOTIFY: https://open.spotify.com/artist/2dyX0QEcKG56dd5l9Pd2G5 AND https://open.spotify.com/artist/5g0bnBLy36bFr7ssEW2vcS?si=q0Po5CSaRT2hAk-xB4kUzQ
ITUNES/APPLE MUSIC: https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/juvenescence/1450328437
BANDCAMP: https://laureliamadeus.bandcamp.com/
SOUNDCLOUD: https://soundcloud.com/user-272629114
TUMBLR: laureli-amadeus-music.tumblr.com
INSTAGRAM: https://www.instagram.com/laureli.amadeus/
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[Verse]
I could go blind, but it’d be alright
One day we’re gone, but I know I’ll survive
Take me home
Take me home
Take me home to heaven on Earth
[Chorus 1]
Take me home
Take me home
Take me home to heaven on Earth
Heaven on Earth
Day by day you whisper to my soul
I’m so young, but Im getting old
Old
[Bridge]
Na-na-na-na na-na-na-na-na na-na
Na-na-na-na na-na-na-na-na na-na
Na-na-na-na na-na-na-na-na na-na
Na-na-na-na na-na-na-na-na na-na
[Chorus 2]
You’re the freshest breath of air I’ll ever breathe
The warmest melody
Drifting down like snow in the mid-June summertime
Just one touch, it feels so sublime
(Oh, oh, oh oh-oh) it’s so sublime
No, no, no, it won’t ever die
Cause you’re as steady as the sunrise
[Bridge 2]
Now lay me down to rest (to rest)
But don’t you cry your tears just yet
I’ll see you again
Oh
[Chorus]
You’re the freshest breath of air I’ll ever breathe
The warmest melody
Drifting down like snow in the mid-June summertime
Just one touch, it feels so sublime (Take me home)
(Oh, oh, oh oh-oh) it’s so sublime (Take me home)
No, no, no, it won’t ever die (Take me home)
Cause you’re as steady as the sunrise
Take me home
Take me home
Take me home to heaven on Earth
Heaven on Earth
Day by day you whisper to my soul
I’m so young, but Im getting old Laureli Amadeus & R.J. Tolson - Take Me Home](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/jRB8LdWMJIE/mqdefault.jpg)

