WriteHollyDavis | Sharing My Query Package Feedback + My Camp NaNoWriMo Plan! @WriteHollyDavis | Uploaded April 2022 | Updated October 2024, 1 hour ago.
Hey writer friends! Welcome back to my channel. :) Today's video was super fun to film! I share the feedback I got on my query submission package- my query letter, first 10 pages of my novel, and synopsis. Watch on to see my reactions as I read my query feedback in real-time and what I have to fix. I also reveal some of my CP's feedback on the 3rd draft and review my Camp NaNoWriMo plan!
Comment below and tell me: What's your Camp NaNoWriMo Plan or recent writerly goals?⤵
Videos Mentioned:
How to Write a Query and Synopsis: youtu.be/3hTvo0GBI7c
Writer Hack: The GMC Method: youtu.be/6cwx-0RsUUk
Time Stamps:
00:00 Intro
01:13 My Editor's Email
02:20 My Query Letter Feedback
05:22 My Synopsis Feedback
09:44 My 1st 10 Pages Feedback
14:10 My Camp NaNoWriMo Plan
15:45 My CP's 3rd Draft Feedback
17:41 Outro
Editing Advice Playlist:
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hollydavisbooks.com
Writing Sprint Timers Playlist: youtube.com/playlist?list=PLRAw-sOu1AE3abU0B-bx7QwN2X8q4zfj3
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Website: hollydavisbooks.com
Instagram: instagram.com/writehollydavis
Twitter: twitter.com/writehollydavis
Facebook: facebook.com/writehollydavis
Get 2 free months of audiobooks: scribd.com/g/8hkwsw
Author Website BootCamp: Use this link to build your author platform!
authorbrittanywang.teachable.com/?affcode=406287_yesmaqhj
My favorite writing craft books:
Save the Cat! Writes a Novel: amzn.to/2tTMPGs
The Emotion Thesaurus 2nd edition: amzn.to/2AXUYxc
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers: amzn.to/2M9JhI6
The Emotional Craft of Fiction: amzn.to/2Ftemp2
Creating Character Arcs: amzn.to/2TOfNlT
I love getting real mail. I write back!
Holly Davis
PO Box 957442
Hoffman Estates, IL 60195
#WriteHollyDavis #AuthorTubeChannel #WritingAdvice
Amazon and AWBC links are affiliate links in which I receive a small commission for your purchase using my link! My Scribd link is also an affiliate link in which you get 2 months free and I get one month free! :)
B roll music:
Track: Fly — KV [Audio Library Release]
Music provided by Audio Library Plus
Watch: youtu.be/KcOVhEhrZnU
Free Download / Stream: alplus.io/fly
Hey writer friends! Welcome back to my channel. :) Today's video was super fun to film! I share the feedback I got on my query submission package- my query letter, first 10 pages of my novel, and synopsis. Watch on to see my reactions as I read my query feedback in real-time and what I have to fix. I also reveal some of my CP's feedback on the 3rd draft and review my Camp NaNoWriMo plan!
Comment below and tell me: What's your Camp NaNoWriMo Plan or recent writerly goals?⤵
Videos Mentioned:
How to Write a Query and Synopsis: youtu.be/3hTvo0GBI7c
Writer Hack: The GMC Method: youtu.be/6cwx-0RsUUk
Time Stamps:
00:00 Intro
01:13 My Editor's Email
02:20 My Query Letter Feedback
05:22 My Synopsis Feedback
09:44 My 1st 10 Pages Feedback
14:10 My Camp NaNoWriMo Plan
15:45 My CP's 3rd Draft Feedback
17:41 Outro
Editing Advice Playlist:
youtube.com/playlist?list=PLRAw-sOu1AE157g2Fo4zHnCfeOsMZpDDq
Snag your FREE writer checklists below:
hollydavisbooks.com
Writing Sprint Timers Playlist: youtube.com/playlist?list=PLRAw-sOu1AE3abU0B-bx7QwN2X8q4zfj3
Support BLM charities and snag Diversity is Lit Merch: teespring.com/stores/diversity-is-lit
Join the Diversity is Lit Book Club!
Goodreads Group (our main hub where we vote on books and share fun stuff!): goodreads.com/group/show/1141013-diversity-is-lit-book-club
Instagram: instagram.com/diversityislit
Twitter: twitter.com/diversityislit
Connect with me on social media:
Website: hollydavisbooks.com
Instagram: instagram.com/writehollydavis
Twitter: twitter.com/writehollydavis
Facebook: facebook.com/writehollydavis
Get 2 free months of audiobooks: scribd.com/g/8hkwsw
Author Website BootCamp: Use this link to build your author platform!
authorbrittanywang.teachable.com/?affcode=406287_yesmaqhj
My favorite writing craft books:
Save the Cat! Writes a Novel: amzn.to/2tTMPGs
The Emotion Thesaurus 2nd edition: amzn.to/2AXUYxc
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers: amzn.to/2M9JhI6
The Emotional Craft of Fiction: amzn.to/2Ftemp2
Creating Character Arcs: amzn.to/2TOfNlT
I love getting real mail. I write back!
Holly Davis
PO Box 957442
Hoffman Estates, IL 60195
#WriteHollyDavis #AuthorTubeChannel #WritingAdvice
Amazon and AWBC links are affiliate links in which I receive a small commission for your purchase using my link! My Scribd link is also an affiliate link in which you get 2 months free and I get one month free! :)
B roll music:
Track: Fly — KV [Audio Library Release]
Music provided by Audio Library Plus
Watch: youtu.be/KcOVhEhrZnU
Free Download / Stream: alplus.io/fly
