Uploaded October 2010 | Updated September 2026, 2 weeks ago

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This is the first draft of my latest composition, still a work in progress. This is the first time EVER I compose a song with lyrics, so this is very new to me. This is just a first draft, with only voice and piano, so the style of this song may change drastically.

Please tell me any suggestions about how to continue with this song, and tell me all your feedback, please!

I can't sing, and am trying to find a singer for this song. Do you feel like singing this song? please comment or email me for more info. It would be a pleasure to co-operate with you!

WARNINGS:
- I can't sing
- Very cheap homebrew recording
- bad audio mixing
- just a draft

The song was recorded in audacity.
Piano was recorded by connecting my MO8 synth to the microphone jack of my laptop.
Voice was recorded similarly with a singstar PS2 microphone (LOL that sucks)


LYRICS:
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Why can't you see
that you are hurting me
and I just can't let it be

Why can't you see
that you belong to me
and I can't really let you flee

Why can't you see?
Why can't you see?
Why can't you see that you belong to me?

Why can't you see
that you are hurting me
and I just can't let it be (I say the wrong words here, first time)

(repeat everything)

And I just can't let it be
And I just can't let it be

So please..
stay with me..