katie ann writes | living in a(n) (adult) fantasy // professor katie critiques (#2) @writerofscribbles | Uploaded April 2022 | Updated October 2024, 1 hour ago.
life's a peach and we're all living in the fantasy. what's in a first page? hopefully the keys to success and a hook that will get your readers engaged and loving your story! As someone who spent four years critiquing and analyzing literature, I thought I'd bring you some free advice on first pages. I look over four first pages from four different adult fantasy books and discuss the good, the bad, and the ugly. there is a lot we can learn from analyzing the techniques, prose, and structure of another author's work, so let's go through it together! :D
- t a b l e o f c o n t e n t s -
0:00 - 1:18 - intro
1:18 - 5:08 - city of brass
5:08 - 8:05 - game of thrones prologue
8:05 - 10:44 - game of thrones first chapter
10:44 - 14:13 - city of dusk
14:13 - 16:50 - the poppy war
16:50 - 17:36 - summation
17:36 - 19:02 - outro
- ✨ f i n d m e e l s e w h e r e ✨ -
my tumblr blog for writing memes - - writerofscribbles.tumblr.com
my insta where i post selfies - - instagram.com/writerofscribbles
my spotify jams - - open.spotify.com/user/kamclaughlin1717?si=ehgg9_5eRLmp0rPs4_gr_Aopen.spotify.com/user/kamclaughlin1717?si=xZHR7E4nSbKSCCVxnMIDGQ
be friends with me on NaNo! - - nanowrimo.org/participants/katieann
want to buy me a coffee? - - ko-fi.com/writerofscribbles
- ♫ m u s i c ♫ -
Music by ninjoi. - Where Do I Go - thmatc.co/?l=06EF60C8
Campfire
youtube.com/watch?v=NfXP_YyIXns
frad
Music by ninjoi. - Outro - thmatc.co/?l=7F831B59
- ♥ i n t r o & o u t r o ♥ -
made by moi ♥
Places to donate if you are able -
homeless black trans women fund: https://t.co/CqI9wKyQEk
Indigenous Literacy Foundation - https://www.indigenousliteracyfoundation.org.au/
The National Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Women’s Alliance - https://natsiwa.org.au/
Black Table Arts - blacktablearts.com
Black Hills Legal Defense Fun - bhlegalfund.org
Quileute Tribe Move To Higher Ground - mthg.org
Lebanese Red Cross - https://www.redcross.org.lb/
Support black content creators on YouTube. Every day.
Here are just a few (you may or may not have seen) ~
Amber Burns - youtube.com/channel/UC9wGRQa-JiXIbwjGDl5SSgw
Tabitha Brown - youtube.com/user/Every1hasastory
KaShay Warren - youtube.com/channel/UClwZE6UsflRThFzEShjPa1Q
Tamara Woods - youtube.com/user/pimptwoo
Todrick Hall - youtube.com/user/todrickhall
Shameless Maya - youtube.com/user/shamelessmaya
Scola Dondo - youtube.com/user/StrawberryRipples
Avery Douglas - youtube.com/channel/UCA5L18afqm3uICFrxq-NPKg
myonna reads - youtube.com/channel/UCQBtjMbFlM1oI0ImK8BH7wQ
grapefry - youtube.com/user/grapefry
SweetHime - youtube.com/c/SweetHime
life's a peach and we're all living in the fantasy. what's in a first page? hopefully the keys to success and a hook that will get your readers engaged and loving your story! As someone who spent four years critiquing and analyzing literature, I thought I'd bring you some free advice on first pages. I look over four first pages from four different adult fantasy books and discuss the good, the bad, and the ugly. there is a lot we can learn from analyzing the techniques, prose, and structure of another author's work, so let's go through it together! :D
- t a b l e o f c o n t e n t s -
0:00 - 1:18 - intro
1:18 - 5:08 - city of brass
5:08 - 8:05 - game of thrones prologue
8:05 - 10:44 - game of thrones first chapter
10:44 - 14:13 - city of dusk
14:13 - 16:50 - the poppy war
16:50 - 17:36 - summation
17:36 - 19:02 - outro
- ✨ f i n d m e e l s e w h e r e ✨ -
my tumblr blog for writing memes - - writerofscribbles.tumblr.com
my insta where i post selfies - - instagram.com/writerofscribbles
my spotify jams - - open.spotify.com/user/kamclaughlin1717?si=ehgg9_5eRLmp0rPs4_gr_Aopen.spotify.com/user/kamclaughlin1717?si=xZHR7E4nSbKSCCVxnMIDGQ
be friends with me on NaNo! - - nanowrimo.org/participants/katieann
want to buy me a coffee? - - ko-fi.com/writerofscribbles
- ♫ m u s i c ♫ -
Music by ninjoi. - Where Do I Go - thmatc.co/?l=06EF60C8
Campfire
youtube.com/watch?v=NfXP_YyIXns
frad
Music by ninjoi. - Outro - thmatc.co/?l=7F831B59
- ♥ i n t r o & o u t r o ♥ -
made by moi ♥
Places to donate if you are able -
homeless black trans women fund: https://t.co/CqI9wKyQEk
Indigenous Literacy Foundation - https://www.indigenousliteracyfoundation.org.au/
The National Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Women’s Alliance - https://natsiwa.org.au/
Black Table Arts - blacktablearts.com
Black Hills Legal Defense Fun - bhlegalfund.org
Quileute Tribe Move To Higher Ground - mthg.org
Lebanese Red Cross - https://www.redcross.org.lb/
Support black content creators on YouTube. Every day.
Here are just a few (you may or may not have seen) ~
Amber Burns - youtube.com/channel/UC9wGRQa-JiXIbwjGDl5SSgw
Tabitha Brown - youtube.com/user/Every1hasastory
KaShay Warren - youtube.com/channel/UClwZE6UsflRThFzEShjPa1Q
Tamara Woods - youtube.com/user/pimptwoo
Todrick Hall - youtube.com/user/todrickhall
Shameless Maya - youtube.com/user/shamelessmaya
Scola Dondo - youtube.com/user/StrawberryRipples
Avery Douglas - youtube.com/channel/UCA5L18afqm3uICFrxq-NPKg
myonna reads - youtube.com/channel/UCQBtjMbFlM1oI0ImK8BH7wQ
grapefry - youtube.com/user/grapefry
SweetHime - youtube.com/c/SweetHime
