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This is Disney's biggest writing mistake when it comes to their most recent heroines: Asha with 'This Wish', Moana in Moana 2 with 'Beyond', and Snow White in the live-action remake with 'Waiting On A Wish'. Calxiyn Cares Too Much gives you another secret songwriting tip - and how to avoid making this mistake in your own work!
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This is Disney's biggest writing mistake when it comes to their most recent heroines: Asha with 'This Wish', Moana in Moana 2 with 'Beyond', and Snow White in the live-action remake with 'Waiting On A Wish'. Calxiyn Cares Too Much gives you another secret songwriting tip - and how to avoid making this mistake in your own work!
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![Poison FAILED Angels Character. Heres Why. [Hazbin Hotel]](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/ngAjmpnbZAs/mqdefault.jpg "Poison FAILED Angels Character. Heres Why. [Hazbin Hotel]
Poison is one of the most controversial and divisive songs in Hazbin Hotel - but Calxiyn has found ONE FATAL FLAW that NO ONE ELSE has talked about. Join Calxiyn as she dives into what works well about Poison, what does not, and ultimately the one mistake they made that tips the scales. This Video Essay will break down the instrumentation, lyrics, rhythm and characterization, as well as dive into how the STORYTELLING could have been improved.
00:00 - What we will discuss in this ultimate Poison Song Analysis!
1:18 - The songs instrumentation could have been better...
4:20 - Everything wrong (and right) with Verses 1 & 2
16:04 - Whats missing from this Pre-Chorus and Chorus?
26:20 - Everything wrong (and right) with Verse 3
28:28 - Did this Pre-Chorus and Chorus evolve?
30:52 - Did the ending of the song DELIVER?
34:29 - IMPORTANT KEY LESSON STARTS: Why This Song Just Doesnt Work
42:40 - KEY LESSON CONTINUED: You NEED to earn THIS as a Writer...
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Calxiyn Cares Too Much is a professional musical theatre performer and songwriter who makes video essays about Animated Movie Musicals. This video essay breaks down Poison from Season 1 of Hazbin Hotel, and why it fails as a musical theatre song from a songwriting perspective. This video also provides a comparison between Hazbin Hotel, Wish, which is often brought up as better than Hazbin Hotel, or that Hazbin Hotel is doing the animated movie musical better than Disney - and other animated movie musicals such as The Little Mermaid, Beauty and the Beast, Aladdin, and The Hunchback of Notre Dame from the Disney Renaissance.
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