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I got revenge on the person who took my brother's life and was given a 50-year sentence in prison at 15 years old. One of my brother's friends offered me a chance to provide for my family, get revenge, and live a better life but after I committed this act, nothing changed, and instead, I lost everything. I was sentenced to 50 years in prison where I reflected on my actions and learned how to really honor my brother's passing.
I was born and raised in Marrero, Louisiana where I lived with my mom and brother. My brother was only one year older than I was but I looked up to him and he was my best friend who always looked after me. In school, we were both the “popular kids” because we were friends with everyone. But the thing that made us different was that he was in a gang and I wasn't.
One night I woke up to the sounds of my older brother screaming in pain. I ran straight to his yells and when I got to him, he was laying on the floor bleeding profusely all over. I didn’t know where it was coming from and where it ended; all I knew was, he had been shot. I tried my best to put pressure on his wounds and keep him alive as best I could but I could feel his pulse slowly fading. I held him on my lap speaking to him to hold on, that help was on their way. Then, he closed his eyes and I felt his breathing slow until he left this life and faded into the next. He died before he even made it on the stretcher.
His passing left a void in my life. I rarely ate, I barely went outside or did much of anything until a year had passed and I turned 15 . During my mourning, my mom had been diagnosed with cancer and her medical bills were making it hard for us to live any life. Even though she tried to be strong, I would see her pain and suffering as she struggled to pay for her medical treatments and put food on the table. She would never admit it to me, but I knew. So I did the only thing I knew I could. I dropped out of school and joined the same gang my brother had and began selling drugs.
At first, this worked and we were living fine. But as we fell behind on our bills, we were forced to live in extreme poverty where we constantly moved from house to home and family to friends all throughout our neighborhood. Then, one of my friends, a gang member, told me that he could solve all my problems. I felt like my prayers had been answered. I asked him “how?” He then told me there was a rival who they wanted gone and if I did a job, they’d pay me generously for my actions. At first, I wasn't too interested in the offer because I thought about my mom and couldn’t leave her. But his last words were what piqued my interest. He told me that this guy was the person responsible for my brother’s death.
I went home that night and thought to myself the pros and cons of this atrocious act. I decided that there were far more pros than cons. My only concern was my mother but I was reassured that no one would ever find out and that I wouldn’t be alone. So, I gathered with my closest friends who I knew had my back and we came up with a plan and we all gathered into a small 4 door Chevy car. The entire ride we drove in silence. I could see on their faces and what they were thinking. Some about the plan running it over in their minds and the rest, about the act we were about to commit.
When we got to the man’s house we ran straight to the door and knocked it down. We then rushed up the stairs where I saw him standing in his bedroom. For a moment, I blacked out and stared him in the eyes taking in the face that took my brother's life. And then, all I heard was a bang. I had pulled my trigger and he fell to the ground. We looked around for a few minutes and began taking jewelry, money, anything we could find. We got out of there before other people came, but not the cops because cops didn’t really care for that part of the city.
It was only days after where I finally reflected on my actions. We were all so young, no older than 15 and I said to myself, this life isn’t meant for everyone. This man had a family, kids, people who loved and admired him and I killed him.
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I got revenge on the person who took my brother's life and was given a 50-year sentence in prison at 15 years old. One of my brother's friends offered me a chance to provide for my family, get revenge, and live a better life but after I committed this act, nothing changed, and instead, I lost everything. I was sentenced to 50 years in prison where I reflected on my actions and learned how to really honor my brother's passing.
I was born and raised in Marrero, Louisiana where I lived with my mom and brother. My brother was only one year older than I was but I looked up to him and he was my best friend who always looked after me. In school, we were both the “popular kids” because we were friends with everyone. But the thing that made us different was that he was in a gang and I wasn't.
One night I woke up to the sounds of my older brother screaming in pain. I ran straight to his yells and when I got to him, he was laying on the floor bleeding profusely all over. I didn’t know where it was coming from and where it ended; all I knew was, he had been shot. I tried my best to put pressure on his wounds and keep him alive as best I could but I could feel his pulse slowly fading. I held him on my lap speaking to him to hold on, that help was on their way. Then, he closed his eyes and I felt his breathing slow until he left this life and faded into the next. He died before he even made it on the stretcher.
His passing left a void in my life. I rarely ate, I barely went outside or did much of anything until a year had passed and I turned 15 . During my mourning, my mom had been diagnosed with cancer and her medical bills were making it hard for us to live any life. Even though she tried to be strong, I would see her pain and suffering as she struggled to pay for her medical treatments and put food on the table. She would never admit it to me, but I knew. So I did the only thing I knew I could. I dropped out of school and joined the same gang my brother had and began selling drugs.
At first, this worked and we were living fine. But as we fell behind on our bills, we were forced to live in extreme poverty where we constantly moved from house to home and family to friends all throughout our neighborhood. Then, one of my friends, a gang member, told me that he could solve all my problems. I felt like my prayers had been answered. I asked him “how?” He then told me there was a rival who they wanted gone and if I did a job, they’d pay me generously for my actions. At first, I wasn't too interested in the offer because I thought about my mom and couldn’t leave her. But his last words were what piqued my interest. He told me that this guy was the person responsible for my brother’s death.
I went home that night and thought to myself the pros and cons of this atrocious act. I decided that there were far more pros than cons. My only concern was my mother but I was reassured that no one would ever find out and that I wouldn’t be alone. So, I gathered with my closest friends who I knew had my back and we came up with a plan and we all gathered into a small 4 door Chevy car. The entire ride we drove in silence. I could see on their faces and what they were thinking. Some about the plan running it over in their minds and the rest, about the act we were about to commit.
When we got to the man’s house we ran straight to the door and knocked it down. We then rushed up the stairs where I saw him standing in his bedroom. For a moment, I blacked out and stared him in the eyes taking in the face that took my brother's life. And then, all I heard was a bang. I had pulled my trigger and he fell to the ground. We looked around for a few minutes and began taking jewelry, money, anything we could find. We got out of there before other people came, but not the cops because cops didn’t really care for that part of the city.
It was only days after where I finally reflected on my actions. We were all so young, no older than 15 and I said to myself, this life isn’t meant for everyone. This man had a family, kids, people who loved and admired him and I killed him.
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![“Less Than Perfect” [A Dark Story] | Keepsake Journal #3
Catch-up Episode 1 & 2 here:
#1: https://youtu.be/jaO8fQmEbs0
#2: https://youtu.be/fZqzY4gqSTg
Rellik is forced to decide between leaving his past or start a new life when he is admitted into an unethical mental hospital for destroying property. We learn about his past and why he is so attached to Mia after losing his only friend, Susie. Is he making things worse or should he open up and allow others to help him? Let us know if you would like an Ep. 4.
Susie: *Rock being thrown. click, click, click* Rellik!!
Ahhh. (Opening eyes and staring up at his bedroom ceiling) My ears are bleeding again. It must have been that last slap to the face.
Susie: Down here loser! Hurry up man, Im getting soaked!
Rellik: Susie? If my dad hears you hes going to beat me for it. I told you, I cant today.
Susie: Oh come on, well be in and out before he even hears a thing! If you dont come down here, Ill yell and wake your dad up! 1! 2!...
Rellik: SHHHH. Okay okay, fine. Im coming.
Susie: Damn! Your drunk loser dad hit you pretty bad this time. Theres some blood running down your ear. Remind me again why you dont just report him and live with your mom?
Susie: ...Hey, hey Rellik you listening? I said, wheres Keepsake?
Rellik: What? Oh, ah I completely forgot. I didnt think I would even come tonight, it totally slipped my mind.
Susie: Whatever, we can fill him in tomorrow. Anyway, I picked the lock open, come in before someone sees.
Rellik: Hey-what? Howd we end up here?
Susie: Um...we walked? You told me to break into the medicine cabinet and grab you the pain killers. Are you okay?
Rellik: Im fine. I just had a brain fart. Lets do this. I want to numb everything, all of it; my dad, the bullies at school, everything!
Susie: Whoa there. I dont think thats a good idea. At least look at the bottle before you start emptying them like that. Who knows- Thats too many!
Veterinary doctor: Oh my god what have you done?!? Look at this mess! My files, the tables, my medications, and...where are my animals?!
Rellik: Shhh shhh shhh. Please, your voice is splitting my head into two.
Veterinary doctor: Stay right there Im calling the police!
Rellik: No! Wait, lets work this out. Im sorry for the mess. Ill clean it right up and Ill pay for the damages just dont call the police.
Veterinary doctor: Pay for losses?! Son, you guys burned down half the block. I have no choice.
Rellik: What?! (Sees the full damage) Oh damn.
Rellik: Susie?! You too?! tried to tell them it was all me but they didnt listen.
Susie: Hey, Im tough remember!? And besides, I made you come out with me. Hows your head?
Rellik: Its okay but Im losing chunks of memory still. I dont even remember when I got here.
Susie: You havent been taking the medication have you? You have to stop! I dont know what it is but its probably causing your memory loss. Whatever theyre doing here, its illegal.
Rellik: Susie, I dont think thats a good idea. I dont want to make things worse. I mean, we did burn down a building.
Susie: Look at me! We are not crazy; you are not crazy. St. Elizabeths is not a hospital, its a research center! Why do you think some people never leave?!
Rellik: No. We should just do nothing. If were quiet they wont even notice us or itll all just go away.
Susie: What, just like your dad at home? You need to stand up for yourself and take matters into your own hands or else theyll never stop! Look around! Theyre keeping us drugged so we can forget everything thats going on here. Im not going to sit around and wait for something to happen. Im escaping from here and youre going to help.
Susie: Every now and then the guard meets up with a nurse and they both go into the storage room for a few hours. I figured that is when we make our escape. All youll need to do is grab his keys and wait until theyre together then unlock the door and come get me. Room 217.
Rellik: Fine but how am I going to get his keys?
Susie: Like this! (Punch to Relliks face)
Rellik: OWW! What the f... why did you....(Punch)
Susie: Its your fault Im here! You son of a b-
Rellik: OWWW Get off me! HELP!!
Somehow I managed to see straight and saw the guard rushing over pulling Susie off me. I saw the keys dangling off his belt loop and I glanced over to Susie being held back by the guards. She started mouthing Grab it, grab the keys... And then I unclipped them from his pants and quickly tucked them into my socks and pulled my pant leg down. And then I heard her voice for the last time:
I waited in my room running the plan in my head waiting to hear the sound of 2 doors shutting. One for the person theyd take out of the room and the second when the nurse and guard meet in the storage room.
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