Writer Brandon McNulty | How to Make Your Writing Less Wordy (6 Easy Tips) @WriterBrandonMcNulty | Uploaded January 2022 | Updated October 2024, 16 minutes ago.
Cut down wordy sentences and phrases with these easy tips.
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Get Brandon's supernatural thriller novel ENTRY WOUNDS:
- AMAZON (USA): amzn.to/2XL737v
- AMAZON (UK): amazon.co.uk/dp/B097YGX2DH
- AMAZON (CAN): amazon.ca/dp/B097YGX2DH
- AMAZON (AUS): https://www.amazon.com.au/dp/B097YGX2DH
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- OTHER RETAILERS: books2read.com/EntryWounds
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0:00 Intro
0:35 Tip #1 Make Large-Scale Cuts First
1:27 Tip #2 Cut Unneeded Words From Dialogue
2:16 Tip #3 Avoid Adverbs & Use Stronger Verbs/Adjs
3:36 Tip #4 Cut Prepositional Phrases
4:56 Tip #5 Active Voice vs. Passive Voice
6:07 Tip #6 Trim Down BLOATED Phrases
DISCLAIMER: Some of my videos and/or descriptions contain affiliate links, which means that if you click on one of the product links, I’ll receive a small commission. This helps support the channel and allows me to continue to make videos like this. This does not affect my review of products. All opinions are my own. Thank you for the support!
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Credit to SkyDilen for my video intro.
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Cut down wordy sentences and phrases with these easy tips.
Get Brandon's horror/thriller novel BAD PARTS:
- AMAZON (USA): amzn.to/3esTFYC
- AMAZON (UK): amazon.co.uk/dp/B088QLMWKW
- AMAZON (CAN): amazon.ca/dp/B088QLMWKW
- AMAZON (AUS): https://www.amazon.com.au/dp/B088QLMWKW/
- BARNES & NOBLE: tinyurl.com/BadPartsBN
- AUDIBLE: audible.com/pd/Bad-Parts-Audiobook/B08CXNY2RF
- OTHER RETAILERS: books2read.com/badparts
Get Brandon's supernatural thriller novel ENTRY WOUNDS:
- AMAZON (USA): amzn.to/2XL737v
- AMAZON (UK): amazon.co.uk/dp/B097YGX2DH
- AMAZON (CAN): amazon.ca/dp/B097YGX2DH
- AMAZON (AUS): https://www.amazon.com.au/dp/B097YGX2DH
- BARNES & NOBLE: tinyurl.com/EntryWoundsBN
- AUDIBLE: tinyurl.com/EWAudible
- OTHER RETAILERS: books2read.com/EntryWounds
Follow Brandon McNulty:
WEBSITE (Join my mailing list!) - brandonmcnulty.com
TWITTER - twitter.com/McNultyFiction
FACEBOOK - facebook.com/McNultyFiction
SUBSCRIBE to Writer Brandon McNulty here: youtube.com/channel/UChqAmyhEejCMMIxJmvUrdYw?sub_confirmation=1
0:00 Intro
0:35 Tip #1 Make Large-Scale Cuts First
1:27 Tip #2 Cut Unneeded Words From Dialogue
2:16 Tip #3 Avoid Adverbs & Use Stronger Verbs/Adjs
3:36 Tip #4 Cut Prepositional Phrases
4:56 Tip #5 Active Voice vs. Passive Voice
6:07 Tip #6 Trim Down BLOATED Phrases
DISCLAIMER: Some of my videos and/or descriptions contain affiliate links, which means that if you click on one of the product links, I’ll receive a small commission. This helps support the channel and allows me to continue to make videos like this. This does not affect my review of products. All opinions are my own. Thank you for the support!
#WritingAdvice #WritingTips #Writing #author #betterstories #authortube #booktube #authortuber #howtowrite #BrandonMcNulty #WriterBrandonMcNulty #BadParts #WritingCommunity
Credit to SkyDilen for my video intro.
=======================================
CHECK OUT MY OTHER VIDEOS:
Mastering Scene Structure:
youtu.be/012OMrKp85M
Writing Scenes that Flow:
youtu.be/rGqR3Oj61yo
5 Fatal Mistakes that New Writers Make
youtu.be/_2mYh1-33-Y
5 Time-Saving Tips for Writers (And Readers!)
youtu.be/z-Hjg70clbw
5 Scientific Inaccuracies in Movies, TV, & Books
youtu.be/MeaamwDwg9w
Query Letter Survival Tips
youtu.be/LS6KIz2G5n4
The BEST Writing Exercise Out There
youtu.be/nHXprJhiqzs
How to Write a Book Pitch
youtu.be/4paxjmDoXIw
Writing Villains #1 - Start with Your Hero
youtu.be/IVcy-_FkPJI
Writing Villains #2 - Goals
youtu.be/_1lmtZQr8RY
Writing Villains #3 - Motivation
youtu.be/tJH78C3nKvg
Writing Villains #4 - When to Introduce Your Villain
youtu.be/FCzs0tuWICY
Writing Villains #5 - Plot Points for Villains
youtu.be/IKuZjpPVxak
Writing Villains #6 - Impacting the Hero
youtu.be/XmHLiFlfqNY
The Anatomy of Story REVIEW:
youtu.be/IWxdj9rKCu8
Save the Cat Writes a Novel REVIEW:
youtu.be/w-5x0QFUc4w
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