Abbie Emmons | Bookish Pet Peeves I CANNOT STAND ❌ don't make these mistakes! @AbbieEmmons | Uploaded April 2023 | Updated October 2024, 8 hours ago.
Bookish pet peeves — aka: things you HATE in stories. When you read these cliches and trends, you just want to throw the book across the room. That’s what today’s video is all about! I’m sharing my biggest bookish pet peeves and why I hate these cliches so much… PLUS some helpful advice for ways you can fix these mistakes in your own writing! So if you want to avoid ticking off your readers and making them never want to read your stuff again… TAKE NOTES.
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✨ T I M E S T A M P S ✨
00:00 let’s talk about pet peeves
01:21 flat characters
02:30 flawless protagonist
03:22 not like other girls
04:09 fake tension
04:57 miscommunication
06:09 infodumping
07:15 rebel without a cause
08:15 punching bag characters
09:06 pretentious prose
09:38 inconsistent personalities
10:56 character voice
12:09 too much description
12:29 toxic relationships
13:39 “said”
14:32 repeat information
15:27 rushed romance
15:39 perfectly structured sentences
16:06 killing characters for no reason
16:55 modern slang in historical fiction
17:35 love interest freakishly older than mc
18:26 convoluted plots
19:21 tell me your bookish pet peeves!
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→ WHAT TO WRITE ABOUT WHEN YOU’RE BORED
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→ THE ULTIMATE CHARACTER PROFILE
youtube.com/watch?v=k1W5DSOlPrw&t=198s
→ HOW TO STAY MOTIVATED TO WRITE YOUR NOVEL
youtube.com/watch?v=szVP7y38Rc4
→ MY CHAPTER-BY-CHAPTER OUTLINING METHOD
youtube.com/watch?v=KqTnmNjkaec&t=434s
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Business inquiries: abbie@abbieemmonsauthor.com
✨ A B O U T ✨
My name is Abbie Emmons I teach writers how to make their stories matter by harnessing the power and psychology of storytelling, transforming their ideas into a masterpiece, and creating a lifestyle that makes their author dreams come true.
Story isn’t about “what happens” — it’s about how what happens affects and transforms the characters. I believe that there is an exact science (a recipe, if you will) behind a perfect story. And if you know what ingredients you need, you can create your own perfect story with ease and confidence. That’s what we talk about every week on this channel – and if it’s something you’re into, be sure to subscribe and join this community!
Bookish pet peeves — aka: things you HATE in stories. When you read these cliches and trends, you just want to throw the book across the room. That’s what today’s video is all about! I’m sharing my biggest bookish pet peeves and why I hate these cliches so much… PLUS some helpful advice for ways you can fix these mistakes in your own writing! So if you want to avoid ticking off your readers and making them never want to read your stuff again… TAKE NOTES.
__________________________
✨ T I M E S T A M P S ✨
00:00 let’s talk about pet peeves
01:21 flat characters
02:30 flawless protagonist
03:22 not like other girls
04:09 fake tension
04:57 miscommunication
06:09 infodumping
07:15 rebel without a cause
08:15 punching bag characters
09:06 pretentious prose
09:38 inconsistent personalities
10:56 character voice
12:09 too much description
12:29 toxic relationships
13:39 “said”
14:32 repeat information
15:27 rushed romance
15:39 perfectly structured sentences
16:06 killing characters for no reason
16:55 modern slang in historical fiction
17:35 love interest freakishly older than mc
18:26 convoluted plots
19:21 tell me your bookish pet peeves!
________________________________
Subscribe for weekly episodes of #WritersLifeWednesdays! Make Your Story Matter™ and make your author dreams come true… new videos every Wednesday.
✨ V A L U A B L E R E S O U R C E S✨
❤️GET BONUS CONTENT + SUPPORT THIS CHANNEL: patreon.com/abbieemmons
📚READ MY DEBUT NOVEL, 100 DAYS OF SUNLIGHT: amzn.to/2Et7fhS
🖥️TAKE MY SCRIVENER MASTERCLASS: makeyourstorymatter.teachable.com/p/teachmescrivener
✏️TAKE MY MASTERCLASS ON EDITING: learnfromabbie.com/p/edit-your-book-like-a-pro
💬TAKE MY BOOK BLURB MASTERCLASS: learnfromabbie.com/p/how-to-craft-a-bestseller-book-blurb
📓GET MY FREE WRITING TEMPLATES: eepurl.com/gFYD8z
💵GET 20% OFF SCRIVENER - USE CODE "ABBIE" → https://a.paddle.com/v2/click/49535/117669?link=1570
🎤LISTEN TO MY PODCAST WITH MY SISTER: https://anchor.fm/kate-and-abbie-show
🎥 MY GEAR + WRITING TOOLS: abbieemmonsauthor.com/my-gear
🎵 I GET ALL MY MUSIC FROM EPIDEMIC SOUND… CLAIM YOUR 60-DAY FREE TRIAL HERE: epidemicsound.com/referral/v02bl3
💛 GET CANVA FOR EASY GRAPHIC DESIGN: partner.canva.com/7mN1Z5
MORE VIDEOS YOU WOULD LIKE:
→ WHAT TO WRITE ABOUT WHEN YOU’RE BORED
youtube.com/watch?v=A_3PL1a4K7E&t=809s
→ THE ULTIMATE CHARACTER PROFILE
youtube.com/watch?v=k1W5DSOlPrw&t=198s
→ HOW TO STAY MOTIVATED TO WRITE YOUR NOVEL
youtube.com/watch?v=szVP7y38Rc4
→ MY CHAPTER-BY-CHAPTER OUTLINING METHOD
youtube.com/watch?v=KqTnmNjkaec&t=434s
✨F O L L O W ✨
blog: bit.ly/2Kl21m8
facebook: bit.ly/2FS2Ikh
instagram: bit.ly/2Xr5hUI
patreon: patreon.com/abbieemmons
Business inquiries: abbie@abbieemmonsauthor.com
✨ A B O U T ✨
My name is Abbie Emmons I teach writers how to make their stories matter by harnessing the power and psychology of storytelling, transforming their ideas into a masterpiece, and creating a lifestyle that makes their author dreams come true.
Story isn’t about “what happens” — it’s about how what happens affects and transforms the characters. I believe that there is an exact science (a recipe, if you will) behind a perfect story. And if you know what ingredients you need, you can create your own perfect story with ease and confidence. That’s what we talk about every week on this channel – and if it’s something you’re into, be sure to subscribe and join this community!
