Writer Brandon McNulty | Bad Dialogue vs Good Dialogue ROUND 2 (Writing Advice) @WriterBrandonMcNulty | Uploaded August 2022 | Updated October 2024, 47 seconds ago.
Explore five new types of bad dialogue and learn how to fix them. Examples from Game of Thrones, The Dark Knight, The Godfather, Titanic, Star Wars, and more!

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0:00 Intro
0:27 Good Dialogue
1:32 Good Dialogue Example
2:18 Bad Dialogue
2:37 Name Calling
4:46 Preachy Dialogue
7:31 Filler Dialogue
9:47 Relentlessly Repeated Phrases
12:31 Clunky Comebacks
14:41 Outro
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