Uploaded July 2025 | Updated September 2026, 46 minutes ago

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Avoid the five worst mistakes that writers make when crafting horror stories. Includes examples from IT, Alien, The Wicker Man, Jurassic Park, and more!

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0:00 Intro
0:18 Book & Brews 2.0 Giveaway
0:47 Mistake 1 - Botching the Tone
2:44 Mistake 2 - Characters We Don't Care About
5:23 Mistake 3 - Monsters Over Atmosphere
6:51 Mistake 4 - Selectively Dangerous Threats
8:20 Mistake 5 - Explanation Over Imagination
9:56 Outro

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