【Sorane Rana・Hatsune Miku】Fall into Unseen Darkness【English Translation-REUPLOAD】 @WallachiaTatari

WallachiaTatari Original Video is from Nicovideo: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14205736

Lyrics, Composition and Arrangement: kaoling
Illustrated by 渡太一
Movie: Ronzu, Shiiru, tlo, cuku, 魔汁
(This team is called "Deltasphere", I suppose).
Marilolthisishard said 魔汁 is read as "Mashiro", TheSymchan said it was read as "Majiru", and after a little search, I found a 魔汁 which is read as "Majiru". Dunno about this one. Thank you anyway, Marilothisishard and TheSymchan :)

This time I go with the original title. Too much for typesettings (which isn't my strong point anyway). There is a few adjustment in the translation, and most of them are due to my misunderstanding of the song's meaning. I apologise for such hollow thinking of me.

Mistakes in my translation:
1. Stupid typoes.
2. By "instantneous", I mean "Instantaneous", guess my English is getting worse...
3. That "unintelligentable" translation, actually, it was the "figure" who "forget" the "tears". As you can see, I want to cut the sentence base on that little break in Miku's singing. But in the end, that was too much for a non-native English speaker like me.

"Ill-treatment. Destiny. Adult. Man's hand (Song contains imaginary words)"
This was Original Author's comment, retrieved from http://www5.atwiki.jp/hmiku
About the comment, I'll make it clear, this song is about Child Abuse, a sensitive subject. Everything is vague, so hope I won't get kicked by translating this.
"Me" in this song is probably kaoling herself.

Also, check this cool vid sung by Re: and Lily
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14205733
(You see, there is actually a guy called "Re:" out there. I didn't spell it wrong, yeah).

You may already know kaoling from an over-200000-view-count (data retrieved on June 12th, 2011) song called "神の名前に堕ちる者".

Of course, nothing is mine. What I did was just to desperately trying to translate this song for myself and whoever need it.
By the way, I haven't studied Japanese properly enough to start a proper conversation to ask for kaoling's permission, so please don't be surprised when the video just disappears magically because of her request.

Download this to know more about the song (Special thanks to LuYurippe! I would not have found this valuable file without you!)
http://www.mediafire.com/?7wihni7b74iaf3s
This contains both the original file of kaoling and my translation. If you know Japanese, even just a little, please check it and point out any mistake I may have.
There is one sentence that I have completely no confident in, yeah. I beg you guys, please check it out if you know Japanese "TwT.

To summary, kaoling is motivated by the death of a seven years old boy, who passed away in January 2010 due to his parents's mistreat. It's painful, and people will gradually forget about it, or at least that's what they want to. It's not a bad thing, but kaoling herself doesn't want people to forget how painful this piece of news was. Thus, she decides to place such thought in the lyrics.

P/s: kaoling uses "atashi", so naturally kaoling is a "she", right @_@?

updated 15 years ago

【Sorane Rana・Hatsune Miku】Fall into Unseen Darkness【English Translation-REUPLOAD】

WallachiaTatari 2011-06-19 | Original Video is from Nicovideo: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14205736

Lyrics, Composition and Arrangement: kaoling
Illustrated by 渡太一
Movie: Ronzu, Shiiru, tlo, cuku, 魔汁
(This team is called "Deltasphere", I suppose).
Marilolthisishard said 魔汁 is read as "Mashiro", TheSymchan said it was read as "Majiru", and after a little search, I found a 魔汁 which is read as "Majiru". Dunno about this one. Thank you anyway, Marilothisishard and TheSymchan :)

This time I go with the original title. Too much for typesettings (which isn't my strong point anyway). There is a few adjustment in the translation, and most of them are due to my misunderstanding of the song's meaning. I apologise for such hollow thinking of me.

Mistakes in my translation:
1. Stupid typoes.
2. By "instantneous", I mean "Instantaneous", guess my English is getting worse...
3. That "unintelligentable" translation, actually, it was the "figure" who "forget" the "tears". As you can see, I want to cut the sentence base on that little break in Miku's singing. But in the end, that was too much for a non-native English speaker like me.

"Ill-treatment. Destiny. Adult. Man's hand (Song contains imaginary words)"
This was Original Author's comment, retrieved from http://www5.atwiki.jp/hmiku
About the comment, I'll make it clear, this song is about Child Abuse, a sensitive subject. Everything is vague, so hope I won't get kicked by translating this.
"Me" in this song is probably kaoling herself.

Also, check this cool vid sung by Re: and Lily
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14205733
(You see, there is actually a guy called "Re:" out there. I didn't spell it wrong, yeah).

You may already know kaoling from an over-200000-view-count (data retrieved on June 12th, 2011) song called "神の名前に堕ちる者".

Of course, nothing is mine. What I did was just to desperately trying to translate this song for myself and whoever need it.
By the way, I haven't studied Japanese properly enough to start a proper conversation to ask for kaoling's permission, so please don't be surprised when the video just disappears magically because of her request.

Download this to know more about the song (Special thanks to LuYurippe! I would not have found this valuable file without you!)
http://www.mediafire.com/?7wihni7b74iaf3s
This contains both the original file of kaoling and my translation. If you know Japanese, even just a little, please check it and point out any mistake I may have.
There is one sentence that I have completely no confident in, yeah. I beg you guys, please check it out if you know Japanese "TwT.

To summary, kaoling is motivated by the death of a seven years old boy, who passed away in January 2010 due to his parents's mistreat. It's painful, and people will gradually forget about it, or at least that's what they want to. It's not a bad thing, but kaoling herself doesn't want people to forget how painful this piece of news was. Thus, she decides to place such thought in the lyrics.

P/s: kaoling uses "atashi", so naturally kaoling is a "she", right @_@?

Kachou Fuugetsu with English Subtitle

WallachiaTatari 2010-02-27 | http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm9198361
Author: Kagrra-P
This video can be deleted anytime because I don't know how to contact the original author for permission (Well, it's more like my Japanese is too SUCK to do so).

CORRECTION!!!
時を廻りて、あなたの元へ
I mistook the meaning of "元", thus giving in a wrong translation of the whole sentence. It's supposed to be like this:
"Whirling around time, back to your side".

Special Thanks to
Damesukekun for pointing out my mistake!
Aqua1Dakemura and Vocaloid2HatsuneMiku for Proofreading my translation!

This song was originally sung by Miku (also produced by Kagrra himself): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NfUV4mlsulU
I thought this PV is nice, and decided to work on this.
About the title. It have four Kanji: 花: Flower 鳥: Bird 風: Wind 月: The Moon. These are "the traditional themes of natural beauty in Japanese aesthetics" (http://jisho.org/words?jap=%E8%8A%B1%E9%B3%A5%E9%A2%A8%E6%9C%88&eng=&dict=edict). In short, it's "Beauties of Nature".
This isn't a Jap to Viet to Eng translation, furthermore, I'm also the one translating it to Vietnamese, so don't worry, everything is under my control, lolz :P.

Is this translation accurate? Well, to be honest, it's not. I did some changes to make this easier to read. However, it seems that this song's meaning can be understood in various way, base on the view point. And although I translated this in my perception, each of my friends still gave different thought about my Vietnamese Subtitle. So I'll leave the meaning aside, just enjoy it in your own ways :P.

And also, if you think there is any part that need to be more accurate, please tell me immediately. I don't mind reuploading this.

Some information about Kagrra-P from ymiya916 (also known as ymiyass900, ymiyass901 or ymiyaf1):

Kagrra-P made his debut in Mar.2009, and his first work got tens of thousands of view counts. After his debut, his works get many view counts constantly. He is good at producing songs of traditional Japanese sound.

Thank you for watching!

Kachou Fuugetsu - Vẻ đẹp thiên nhiên (Beauties of Nature) Vietsub

WallachiaTatari 2010-01-09 | Tác giả: Kagrra-P
Đoạn phim này có thể bị xóa bất kì lúc nào vì mình không biết cách để liên lạc với tác giả để xin sự cho phép.
Chỉ có phụ đề là của mình thôi.

***Chỉnh sửa!!!: Điệp khúc "Toki wo megurite, anata no moto e" mình dịch sai khá nghiêm trọng bởi vì cái chữ đọc là moto ấy có khá nhiều nghĩa, trong đó một nghĩa bé xíu là "bên" (người nào ấy). Tớ do chủ quan không xem lại nên đã dịch sót ý này.
Sửa lại thì nó sẽ là: "Quay theo thời gian, để về bên bạn".
(À, ai đã xem đoạn sau thì chắc cũng đã biết hiện tại người bạn của chúng ta đang ở đâu nên... Phù, ít ra không bị lệch dữ dội quá ="=).

Vẻ đẹp của tự nhiên là một cái tên đơn giản. Mình đã nghĩ rằng đây sẽ là một bài luyện tập tốt cho việc dịch của mình. Tuy nhiên mình đã mau chóng nhận ra rằng đây thật sự là một đối thủ khó chơi. Tuy nhiên do không chịu bỏ cuộc giữa chừng, cuối cùng mình đã hiểu được ý nghĩa thật của bài hát này (có lẽ vậy...).
Tuy nhiên do vốn lười nên tạm thời mình sẽ chưa viết cách hiểu của mình ra :-... Để mấy ngày nữa, khi nào rỗi hơn mình sẽ viết.
Cám ơn vì đã theo dõi!

Một chút thông tin (nguồn do Ymiya916 cung cấp):

Kagrra-P bắt đầu xuất hiện trước công chúng từ tháng 3-2009, và tác phẩm đầu tiên của anh ta đã ngay lập tức có hơn 1 vạn lượt xem. Sau khởi đầu này, các tác phẩm khác của nhạc sĩ này cũng nhận được một số lượng lượt xem đều đặn. Anh ta rất giỏi sáng tác những bài hát mang âm hưởng truyền thống của Nhật.

Synchronicity 1-3 Looking For You In The Sky (Tìm chị trong bầu trời) Vietsub

WallachiaTatari 2009-12-30 | English Translation by Motokokusanagi2009: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bg59is5AyUg
English Translation by Catdolljin: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b55QRTddJz0
Author: ひとしずくP (Hitoshizuku-P)

Chỉ có phụ đề là của mình thôi...
Mình không biết làm thế nào để liên lạc xin sự cho phép của tác giả, vậy nên đoạn phim này có thể bị xóa bất kì lúc nào.
Đây là phần đầu tiên của series Synchronicity. Đã có hai phần được tung ra, và phần hai sẽ có bản dịch Tiếng Việt từ VnSharing sớm thôi.
Mặc dù bài hát này ngắn nhưng các câu thì lại khá dài. Mình cũng không chắc liệu mình có hiểu đúng không nữa. Hãy sửa các lỗi sai của mình nếu có.

Một chút thông tin về tác giả (do Ymiya916 cung cấp):
Tác phẩm của Hitoshizuku-P bất ngờ có một số lượng lớn lượt xem khi cô bắt đầu sáng tác bài hát cho cặp song sinh Kagamine. Và cuối cùng nữ nhạc sĩ này cũng đã đạt được 100.000 lượt xem bằng sáng tác Kimi Wo Sagasu Sora (Tìm chị trong bầu trời).